I'm 99% sure bronze isn't affected by magnetism meaning if someone did learn of her semblance they would simply use that or copper or something and since most greek weapons are made entirely of bronze it would basically make her semblance almost useless and most Noble Phantasm shouldn't be effected by electricity or anything similar to that in anyway even Kanshou and Bakuya aren't pulled together by magnetism but because it's in their legend its the ability of the sword itself.

I was surprised by how much I liked this. You did a fantastic job balancing the silliness and lightheartedness of Carnival Phantasm with the seriousness that's required for this story to be taken as something more than a crack fic. It's probably my favorite aspect of this fic and I think you've nailed it perfectly. While the plot has been fairly shackled to the stations of canon, it's also been very well done, so I have no complaints there. All of the characters (aside from those under Grail Influence) seem perfectly within the realm of beleiveablility as well. Honestly, if I had to give any complaints, it would be that we dont get to see any of the interactions with Coco or Velvet, because despite the fact that they've had a fight against the main cast, and that Shirou used Velvet's name to give perspective to Weiss during her Anti-White Fang incident, I dont think they've actually had any on screen conversations.

Thanks for the chapter

Even though Tuskon is a VERY minor character, it's good to see that he survived. Though I kind of expected the gang to be more blown out of the water with Shirou being an alien.

I sobbed grossly at the last scene, my feels-

People die when they are killer author, lol sorry I actually burst out laughing this chapter keep up the good work

i don’t want to sound pressuring or anything, but is the next chapter being worked on? or do we have to wait some more?

i’m just asking out of curiosity since it’s been some time since the last chapter came out .

... well that, and the fact i finished most everything else i had on my to-read list

... stupid quarantine

but seriously, it’d be nice to at least have an idea of how long we should wait, one-three months, two or five years, maybe a couple decades?

but yeah it’d be nice to have an estimate, even if it’s not wholly accurate

Great chapter
I'm rooting for pyrrha

Been enjoying the chapters so far. Looking forward to more. Stay safe in these troubling times!

Tukson's not dead? All the better indeed. I haven't actually read this chapter yet, I didn't realize it had an update. One of the downsides to not actually having an account is no notifications about updates from favorites/bookmarked fics. I manually bookmark each fic, place them in a relevant folder based off fandoms, and go through them regularly. It's incredibly inefficient, but I refuse to make another account for this website.

"What bird thing?" Lol, best line. Totally worth re-reading again.

Lancer is going to be a huge asset as a fighter to them. If Shirou himself is able to keep up with them physically, Lancer would demolish everyone else. Shirou was losing to Archer with only 1/10th of his strength and barely won against Gilgamesh who wasn't taking him seriously. Lancer easily blitzes full power Emiya and held off a serious Gilgamesh for 12 hours while in a disadvantage. Add magecraft knowledge with Runes and Servant abilities like spirit form to bypass most shit, he would be extremely valuable

Despite the memes about him Lancer is very very powerful and would easily win every fight there in Remnant if he wanted

Note: Runes are actually hard to use in Nasu because they are extensions of a God's authority, without that permission to use them runes would just be a weak magecraft. People with said permission like Lancer or Scathath could fo a lot more impressive things with it with a few rune strokes, like Scathach manipulating the Saint Graph of a servant. In modern times the only notable people in runes are the Fraga family with their godblood giving them more power there and Touko with 3 Primeaval Runes and boy are they useful in spellwork

great story so far

Surprised and disappointed in your readers for being butthurt about a non-Shirou centric chapter. Personally, I loved that you’re fleshing out the world more.

Very entertaining read so far, the Carnival Phantasm source Shirou was definitely not an idea I had heard before. Props for shaking up canon (swapping around team members etc) and for including minor characters. I particularly enjoy how well you made everything fit together.

Weird portrayal of Ozpin, but I suppose it works with the slightly whacky universe this is turning out to be. Really really hope you don’t do a harem route personally, since I find that such routes usually come at a severe cost of character development. I’m probably in a minority there.

Rooting for Ruby cuz she’s my favorite. Also hyped for more Lancer.

Thanks for all your work writing this. Looking forward to finishing up what you’ve done.

Nice chapter