Reviews for My Hero Academia Untold: The Fafnir Knight
Freak4Anime chapter 6 . 7/14
SevenRenny is really amazing
ShadowFallz chapter 33 . 6/29
Update plz
AdrianVnz chapter 34 . 6/29
We need moreeeeee.

Is there no death penalty in japan? Either RL or in universe for your fic? I do get why they don't kill him out of hand, that is a slippery slope if there ever wa sone, and it always ends with people getting "corrupted" for lack of a better word
AdrianVnz chapter 33 . 6/29
So this is the latest real big chapter, i will check the other 1 (draco knight) and see what spoilers i get :P, also try to decypher the cypher from the interlude chapters for fun.

Man i really hope you ipdate fast since next chapter seens really good and it been a while sinc ei am actually this excited about reading the sports festival arc, so many things to see (crossing my fingers Ocha and Izu kiss on live tv xD)

I wonder what the MLA is doing, i feel since this is divided into sagas that they may turn out to be the next saga's enemy, and that they will be more powerfull than canon since thanks to the Neocom pseudo nazi shennanigans they will actually make a point with the public, wouldn't surprise me if they are encouraging the movement knowing it will collapse and then ride the tide of resentment and outrage.

And will we finally have 100% evidence of just who is the youngest brother? I hope so, at this point i have pros and cons for everyone and is driving me crazy!

Funny thing Ochako is doing something i have hear my own mother telling countless girlfriends (my brother's, cousins and even the wif eof 1 uncle, also mine probably but never in front of me of course) of basically not hounding their partner and leeting him breathe.

And i wonder when Stain is going to notice he is being used and get a little suspicious, i mean sooner or alter he will have to consider he may be betraying his ideals? Hopefully before he goes after Ingenium...that was a death flag i just raised right?

Last but not least is a question: is Mimicry twice from canon but with a different quirk? sort of like you have changed the others from the league?

And wow i think this is the biggest review from me so far here, see you soon i hope!
AdrianVnz chapter 32 . 6/29
Bigger is always better...that came out wrong...

And i am starting to think that all 3 of them are spies, at least 1 or 2 double agents or spying for 2 parties (i mean the MLA is around acording to your comments so...)
AdrianVnz chapter 30 . 6/29
Ok, i think i need to point out soemthing for the edit: Mirko's ears are real! Also #saveTheEars (manga readers will understand)

Also i do hope Kouta still delivers the legendary nut cracker, oh god i am evil i know xD

And damn i was counting on Kasei's scars hinting the lost of wings as an evidence of him being the mole, well either Denki is the mole or he is the some of some Yakuza (or rather Phoenix Man, who i assume is/was the Yakuza lrod of the south i think?)

Also i hope we get to see Alex saying this "My grandma can run faster/longer than this! AND SHE IS DEAD!" during the training xD, or some variation.
AdrianVnz chapter 27 . 6/28
You mentioned sealing some of OfA powers earlier but i see that you hinting that those blocks can be lifted if necesary (i am talking about the whole angel thing restoring Jin's powers), i like that idea especially since after seeing the latest manga chapte ri can only say: HOLY SHIT! Izuku may indeed need them, sudenle he seens a lot less OP right?
AdrianVnz chapter 25 . 6/28
First thing first: is phoenix king a shout out to Phoenix Man from One punch man? lol

Second: i will admit Doumeki was a badass, and may still be one, i still hate him.

And what is with the golden eyes? i am seeing a patern...

OMG just over 9 more chapters, less if the shorts are well...shorter xD.
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.*Insert chibi Midnight with a whip*"work faster"*muahahahahahaha*
AdrianVnz chapter 24 . 6/28
Auch, the part about the previous apartment made me twich since i can totally see it coming, just look at what is happening to many doctors worldwide, like they are the first line of defense against the pandemic but they are being persecuted in some of the worst cases, i know of at least 2 cases i saw on the news: 1 in colombia where 1 had to move out of his apartment due to the pressure of the other tenants (they told the landlord either he threw the doctor out or they all moved out), and a worse 1 in mexico where 2 guys burned down a doctor's house, luckily only the 2 bastards died in the fire since the house was empty and that is karma as far as i am concerned, there are lots of doctors in my family so i won't cry for any of these bastards dying, good ridance and i don't care if someone comes out saying they had family or bullshit.

Kai is realizing he sold his soul for bullshit and the whole "who is the mole" is giving me a headache...
AdrianVnz chapter 23 . 6/28
This chapter may also be called "Good is not nice", i hope we do get more details about the past of some students like Mineta and what is their deal with Draco Knight
AdrianVnz chapter 22 . 6/28
I refuse to belive anyone would let Denki be a spy, at least not with his idiot mode, who knows what he would reveal?!

Also nice chapter :P
AdrianVnz chapter 21 . 6/28
First i kind of love the idea of combining this and overhaul's arc, the more enemies make it more interesting especially because if it was like canon them it would be to easy for the good guys (3 teachers, plus the top 5 third years?) at least now this will represent a real danger even with the heroes side being more powerfull than canon.

Also oh god please don't let Kaminari be the spy, or if it is then make it a clear redemption plot (and still ship him with Kyoka xD)

Iwas 99% sure it was Ryu, but then you introduced another OC with golden eyes as the VP of class B. Now i think Ryu is a red herring.
AdrianVnz chapter 16 . 6/27
I actually give them a little bit of slack with the lack of weaponry, they are first years and as its obvious still learning and updating their suits, and some (in canon) probably don't have weapons due to their quirks (like Tooru's).

And Mirio could have trained with Best Jeanist, his quirk is very technical so i bet he could have taugh him up to a level similar to canon (and maybe he interned with 1 of Nighteye's sidekicks)
AdrianVnz chapter 14 . 6/27
Mmmm this is either soemthing inside Izuku's mind (like in a coma) or that some quirk trapped him in a pocket dimension based on the book. Can you give me 1 or 2 letters that AREN'T changed? or is it something like the vocals being the same?
AdrianVnz chapter 13 . 6/27
I am happy if you include lemons out of screen, like you make it clear it happened but no need to go smut territory if you aren't confortable with it.

I always think the issue with Mineta is less his perverted tendencies (he is a 15yo male, i won't throw him any stone for that) but a problñems of impulse control, wich is a real issue.

And yeah half and half was alme name
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