Excellent so far. Love the dark exploration behind both Adora and Catra. And, about time She-ra gets an appearance, right?

I like the kid Adora and Catra flashbacks but in this one they're like 5 or something... Why are you pushing "special feelings" and stuff on them? That makes no sense and gets a huge thumbs down from me.

I love your darker take on the show. If Noelle could've tapped the darker threads of parental manipulation on Adora, like she merely grazed in Catra, we could've had much better characterizations.

OMG "you dont need magical powers to be incredible" Are you trying to kill me with feels because that was too much This chapter was a ride one thing right after another and i loved it I like that we get to see Entrapa and Catras relationship and how its kinda perplexing to others, that roof scene was amazing with catra and adora I wasn't expecting that much affection in that scene so thanks for that I am very interested in how people will react if they have read SW's diaries I hope they wouldn't bring it up to hurt Catra but imo Glimmer can be a huge dick sometimes and i could see her doing that No offense to people who like glimmer but she's not my fav

Can't wait to read more and thanks again for the comfort cuz last chapter definitely put on the hurt

i swear i hate shadow weaver From the jump she didnt like catra and for what The fact that they took her just for her to be abused really pisses me off The beginning of the chapter was super cute and adorable so even with the warning in the beginning i didnt expect it to end like that hope you add tge second part soon Its going to be interesting when Catra has to deal with everyone after this episode she's going though

Hopefully Bow will stop being such a dick about Catra since he will hear even vaguely that catra was being mistreated by sw since she was a child Catras my fav so I want everyone to like her lol can't help it

Also if catra was taken and had a family [since it seems her memory was foggy before waking up] Will you be adding that into the story If so I'd love to see it Even if she doesn't meet family members meeting another magicat would be nice since she has so many hangups about being a cat

the ending reminded of Lemony snicket lol this was a good chapter sucks that catra is still having nightmares but im glad she had a way to forget about with with entrapta Did she ask her to help instead of asking how she was feeling as her own way of helping? I know Entrapa doesn't understand social cues like everyone else but it felt like she did that for her and catra

i love that they are being more open and are getting deeper into the stuff they went through with each other Especially adora because she doesnt have a Scorpia who would help her through her issues like catra does I know she talks to bow but its not the same thing since Scorpia was actually in the horde Looking forward to more I was wondering how or who you plan on them fighting Will you add new people from season 4 to be the new villain and would that change whether or not catra choses to fight with everyone Anyway just random thoughts

Good chapter.

Thought i left a review for the last chapter too but since i didn't this is a twofer Loved the last chapter I like that adora and Entrapa had a bonding moment and that they can talk to each other about the similar issues they are dealing with And i love that we got to see how Entrapa takes notes to actively learn about emotions shes not too sure about [That catra log was a nice touch] They probably won't be super super close but i like that they'll be able to be friends and have a bit more understanding for each other

As for this update i loved the pda Entrapa and Scorpia are too cute together I like how youre putting in info they found out in the other seasons by using hordak Really wondering how youre going to bring up that adora was the one that came through the portal [dairy or light hope telling her idk but that would be interesting either way] I like that you have catra trying to find ways to cope on her own so she isnt codependent on adora anymore because she needs to know she can handel things on her own even if she does have someone who can and wants to help And the ending so super cute I like that they are trying to air out their feelings and get over their personal hang ups for each others comfort [catra hoping bow and adora can be friends n wanting to include her in her friendship with E&S And adora trying to respect boundaries and learn what sets catra off] Looks like they are really trying to build a healthier friendship/relationship Great job!

Good chapter.

Thank you for another lovely chapter! No worries about the wait before this update, readers totally understand that authors have lives outside of writing :p And I hope your health starts improving, no dying on your readers we would miss you very much!
I think giving each other space but still being near each other is going to be a really good way for them to heal and God knows they need a lot of healing. Nervous for the next princess meeting though
P.S. this story gives me Joniss (specifically lifebloodl) vibes and I dig it

this is a real interesting dynamic i like that its a back and forth between "im chill and nah you wildin" its chaotic but necessary and seems very real to me I like that Catra is being open about needing boundries since she's never been able to really make them and have people listen to her wishes

I do hope Adora talks to catra about the hero complex shes always bringing up I feel like Catra doesnt truly understand why Adora feels like she needs to be useful or that Adora doesn't think people really love her I mean SW made her think people only want her for their own reasons so it makes sense that she'd subconsciously make herself a hero If she wasn't then she'd be alone since she wasn't fulfilling a need for anyone

Anyway great chapter cant wait to read more

awesome chapter i like that they are actually talking about things they dont like even if they didnt have bad intentions Hopefully they'll get used to communicating instead of assuming how the other feels The flash backs were bittersweet but i like how you ended it its nice to see them hopeful for a change

omg im so souped shes leaving i know you said we'd like this chapter in the beginning but i had to reserve my hope because ive been burned before lol Honestly i love that you had catra tell lonnie and actually offer to have them come It felt sincere and unrushed I honestly feel like adora asked catra as an afterthought and that always rubbed me the wrong way so even though lonnie decided to stay im glad they actually had this talk...and catra leaving on to better things gives my heart joy i cant wait to see her and adora Im excited Hopefully Adora sees them first before Bows tracker dont want there to be more issues just yet

Another fabulous chapter to a fabulous story. I love this fic! Please keep updating!