Please update and continue this story. I really love it and want to see how it ends

I’ll be honest, I wasn’t expecting a second chapter, but I’m glad there is! I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Oh have them go see a movie

I liked it, now for chapter two...

All right, since this is your first fic, I'll go easier on you.

Overall, the idea of an aftermath to that sleep over episode hasn't really been explored much, and so it's nice to see someone think about what could've happened. I also enjoy the realistic mocking Lincoln received for what happened.

However, I really feel like there was a lot of fat in this chapter. Really, I didn't see why we had to see all of Lincoln's day before having Girl Jordan appear to talk to him.

Also, I noticed a lot of stilted writing and telling more than showing. Try working on your style more, the story felt really slow at times.

Good job mate, I don't rate first fics.

Well written and quite enjoyable! Good job!