Interesting start.

Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #5

Examiner: Angel

Grade: 18.5/20 - EE (Exceeds Expectations)

Feedback: "I could imagine Remus being this way about a farm somewhat. Something felt off but not extremely. Narcissa, in any other terms, felt so domestic like I've never read. She had her qualities, but it was like it could have been more like Andromeda. Though I suppose in the situation that it's in, it could be altered for the very occasion. There were elements and images that I could imagine in my head, and I like that. Overall, you did a nice job. The interactions between the characters are natural enough to bounce off one another. I didn't consider NarcissaRemus much, but now I may have to at some point. I don't think I've read a story like this before. It's certainly different with its characters and scenarios. Nice work!. The flow was a little choppy around the dialogue, but other than that, it was pretty smooth and consistent. It wasn't a huge hiccup to take points away from it. The task was completed and the prompt was used. The AU was the center of things, and the elements involved gave it the farm theme that made it realistic. There were enough details to make the story feel whole and complete without any holes, and I think that it wasn't as rushed. Once I reached the end of the fic, it had a satisfying ending that could lead into more. Good work!. I thought this was interesting, and I think that a general audience would feel the same if they came across it. I don't know if I know any or many people into this ship, so it may turn some readers away, but it's enjoyable nonetheless. I didn't spy any SPaG errors that would take away from the story. The story was within word count, and the necessary information was in the note. Good going, Amanda! I tip my hat to you."

Are they wizards or not? Is it a Muggle AU? Because with a wand, it shouldn't be such a hassle. Love is great but it withers at a steady rate when people are unhappy in their lives.
Make me rise up at 4.30, do exhausting farm work and I'm out there in a week. Love or not.
Money doesn't make people happy, but it helps! Yes, I'm a cynic.

Awe this was really cute! I'm happy I gave you this pairing, it's so hard to find; I would have loved a little backstory on how exactly they fell in love, but even without that, it was super sweet!