I really, really, liked this story. It is as you say and you did skip some things and some parts were fast paced, but I am a fast reader, so it was the perfect pace for me as it constantly kept me entertained and I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end. Very well done, and thank you for sharing your story.

I just found out about ASB. It apparently means 'Alien Space Bats'. I had no idea what ASB meant, so I looked it up. Looking back, it makes total sense. Thanks for teaching me something new.

WTH is a ASB?

that was cool. I dont like Doran that much. Reminds me too much of hoster tully

yeah. so started reading another one of your stories. This one is complete too. I am excited.

I will let you know my thoughts as I read the following chapters.

Wow
Fucking brilliant.
Awesome fucking fic. I loved the way you write the battle for dawn.

What a terrible, terrible story. The fact that you deemed this worthy enough to share with others, without dying of embarrassment, says quite a lot about you.

the single combat by viserys as an 8 year old, headlock.. wish u would remove that from the story.. the superhuman thing makes story boring / over before it began

Every thing is very 1 dimensional.
It’s like the characters are only made for mc to step on

I love this story

i mean its not horrible sure its quick and the writing is not amazing but the plot is their

Good ending

10 to 10

oke i can see how you dealt with the red god, smart but i doubt its that easy.
very nice how you removed the 7 loved that part.
entertaining story but its clear you have very little knowledge of the middle ages

do you honestly think you can shoot a tarp big enough to cover 20.000 men and elephants with just 4 catapults? hell i doubt with modern tech something like this is possible