Nice story but where's the aftermath and finale? Just kidding. Enjoyable fun and great characterisation of Bevier, his beliefs and mannerisms.

What a lovely story!

I loved this fic and I do not much like romantic tales but this was delightful. Your characters fitted so well and in my opinion you told the story in an interesting and clever way. Thankyou for sharing

The content of this chapter brought up race relations in a straight forward common sense way. Often race hatred is learnt from family and or peers. both types you have broached. well done

What a lovely,interesting, funny and romantic story. I would imagine we will get 2 weddings before the end.

Have just finished rereading (for the thousandth time!)

Any plans on updating?

This was a really cute story :D I always enjoy fics about Bevier because he's so awkward! I think you did a pretty good job of estimating how he would act and react to things when in the comfort of his own home.

The ending was a little quick for my tates, but sweet nonetheless. I really enjoyed reading this!

Oh my god... This story lives! This story continues! I remember reading this story years and years ago. This was before I had an account and left reviews I'm sorry to say. But bloody hell... I would compliment you on this and say how awesome this story is, but those comments wouldn't be able to do this justice. Absolutely fantastic work on this. I really hope you update this soon. This story really needs an ending. I'd hate to see it left unfinished. Keep at it.

Lax of me to delay reviewing. I tend to get lost in the wide array of fanfictions available and forget the ones I need to follow. But enough excuses.

My first impression is that it seems like such a sudden turn from being distant and unwilling to being a couple. In the space of just a few paragraphs they are united, just like that. That, however, is a misconception on my part. Time has dimmed the chronology of your story. It seems so immediate because I have returned at the moment of their joining. I must remind myself that this has been sixteen chapters in coming. There is nothing rushed about that, to be sure.

The writing showed no signs of faltering despite the wait. Characterization remained as constant. I do find myself wishing that the other key members of the Eddings canon cast would return, if only because you wrote them so true to the books. It isn't often that a fanfictionist manages to capture a canon character so well, and I think it's a shame if you don't flex that ability more often.

Well written, well plotted, well etc.

Ah so romantic!

It really has been well worth the wait, I'm really glad to see more chapters being added after such a long time. I'm loving it!

Thank you for this update! I read it when you first published but had forgotten my password here. lol Wonderful chapter to an AMAZING story. I look forward to more.

Woot ! another chapter and a wait worth...waiting...for?

meh!

Good to see the story back in the running!

Would have liked to see a duel, Ogelor Vs Lochaber :D

Thank you for the update! I love this story...

My reaction of 'get in there' is probably slightly anachronistic and definitely not in keeping with the lovely, slow build of their relationship... in my defense it's been a long wait!

Looking forward to more.

So happy to see you update! A very well written chapter as always, so professional and absorbing as usual. Love the movement of the story - more please! Not so long next time please!

Yay! I'm so glad you're continuing the story :) Great chapter!