| Reviews for these fault lines (weren't drawn quite right) |
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Tamuril2 chapter 1 . 5/31/2019 FINALLY! I can't begin to tell you how angry I was that the comics never addressed and fixed this. I mean, Dick was R PED by Mirage and everyone just thought it okay to joke about it and never ask "Hey, what's your side of the story?" I hate that guys get the short end of the stick with this (r pe). Ugh. I could go on a twenty thousand page rant about this and what happened to Dick...but I won't. I think you handled this really well. Everyone felt in-character. Dick's sorrow and Jason's horror was palpable. Go Jason for being such an awesome big brother. I hope Mirage soils herself when he arrives to whoop her butt. Any chance you can write a sequel about Jason catching up to Mirage? Also, I would really, REALLY love an AU where Kory and Roy find out what really happened and patch things up with Dick. Pleeeease! I beg of you, write these. This story just pleads for a few followup stories to resolve everything. |
Shimmer.song chapter 1 . 4/12/2019 I don't read the comics so I have no idea if Dick's rape was ever addressed in canon. But I do hope he talked to Someone about it in Canon and recieved support by someone. Thanks for addressing such a sensitve ropic that is non gender biased in a supportive ending where Dick Finally spoke to Someone of his side of the situation. |
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 3/3/2019 I kind of skimmed through the actual discussion, but it's good to see a fic dealing with this. I actually cannot stand the Dick/Kory relationship- I prefer her with Roy, but even then, I'm not a fan of Kory herself, and... Dick completely started this. So... I don't blame Roy. But they were all acting out of line. You did a good job with the emotions though. |
K chapter 1 . 3/3/2019 Sad and emotional story but really well written with a really good plot. |
ti chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 i think you handled it very well and presented them both in character. it was an emotional ride, well written, though a sad topic |
sgtwist chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 This is a nice fanfiction. It was nice for Jason to look out his "little" brother. I too would like do the butt kicking of Roy. You know I never thought of Roy and Dick relationship after they spilt up from the Titans and Roy joined the Outlaws. Did Roy cheat on someone to? |
shejams chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 Wow. That was emotional. It was also very beautifully well written. I almost forgot about the Mirage incident. I think you handled it brilliantly. Poor Dick. First Mirage and then Tarantula. It's a good thing Jay doesn't know about that because knowing him blood and severed heads will be aplenty. I love Dick and Jay's relationship. They are brothers. It was evident how even Jason thinks so. He was so ready to defend Dick to Roy even though Dick was wrong about what he said. He's right it's a bro prerogative. LOL This is why indulging in alcohol drinking games is a bad idea. Old negative feelings almost always ruin it. Anyway, I hope Roy and Dick make up. It hurts that they are not close anymore. Great job. |