| Reviews for Hero for fun! (One-Shot) |
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Junior VB chapter 1 . 6/29/2019 Funny. |
Silverwolf 1o chapter 1 . 6/6/2019 ... wow |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2019 Did you write this story in a different language and Google translate it? |
Soultail Omega-Light chapter 1 . 5/3/2019 That was awesome and hilarious! |
Storyteller D132 chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 gold... just gold XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 First of i liked the oneshot quite alot the pacing was fine . That said your grammer is atrocious it comes off as if you wrote this in a different languge and then used google translate on it. I recommend using a spell check or finding a beta. Anyway good job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 Why is the story written this way? It looks like the story was translated from another language as there are entire words wrong in sentences. It looks like this was written that way on purpose. |
Garrr chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 So many...grammar error...error... ERROR.. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 Second |
jaalco chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 did you write this using google translate |
Iynxx chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 Fir- GODDAMMIT |
gibthegrey chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 First |