Dude, you need to learn to organize your paragraphs better.

This was a good story, really I adored it and the idea of it. I hated the formatting of it though. Was honestly tempted more than once to just stop reading because it was that hard to read. I think you should edit the story into paragraphs, make the dialogue easier to read. :3

I love love this story

Loved it :)

wow great story

love it...

I really like this story, and I'm starting to get into it, but... there's one minor factor I'm having a lot of trouble ignoring. The grammar is so messed up I have to pause every few seconds to put the sentence together in my head. It's really distracting, and I understand you have a beta but... I'm not sure they're doing so well. I'm sorry for that, I've never been to the point where I had to say that before, but it's true.

The sentences are completely screwed, the paragraphs don't change until a new part of the story comes up, and there's a sever lack of punctuation. I'm really sorry for having to say that, but its true.

On the other hand, this is a good storyline. Although I'm not sure about the Oz-bashing, it's understandable since it goes with the idea of the story. I love Tara, but I was always more of a Xander/Willow fan. I like how you've made it so the X-Files are incorporated as well, because the two shows don't seem to mesh that well when you think about it. Somehow you've managed to bring the shows together beautifully though.

I'm going to try to keep reading, although I nearly stopped moments ago because of the grammar in itself. When I read a fic, I always love it when the author has proper grammar skills. I'll see how far I can go though, before its a bit too much.

Sorry for the grammar bashing, but it needed to be said. Good storyline though.

-sakura1120

Cool! Glad they got it out of Oz before he hurt anyone. Keep going!

This is a really good story! keep it all up! i cant wait for the next bit! im really enjoying it!

yo man! dis fanfiction story roks! im lke totally obsessed with it! i'm actually a willow and oz fan but ur story is making me a willow and xander fan! i luv ur story! update soon...im so addicted!:)

Buffy, stop trying to protect Xander. He knows how to handle himself know!

This is not good! I hate to say it, but the only thing that may help Oz free himself from the black oil is his Werewolf form! Now, lets send the Consortium packing!

Its good to see that Willow and Xander are back together. Now, lets see what we can do about keeping Oz from being a BAD PUPPY!

Wonderful! Great chapter!

Entertaining cross-over..I like it.