The smut was pretty good, but the fluff was easily my favorite part of this story. Well done!

I don't hate any ships with rwby but God was this good, to the story to the smut it was great and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Nice ending, this was a wholesome story!

Adding even a little story goes a long way, and this pleasant fluff you’ve been putting in enhanced the smut quite a bit. I really liked that ending and I think you did a great job on this story... BUT, Shanyao is actually a type of Chinese Yam... Though I guess Yang would be happy at the unintended pun of her kid being named Yam Xiao Long. Thanks for the story :)

Nice and sweet.

Will it continue through another story or this one

Great work so far, I can hardly wait for the finale. I kind of hope it’s not a “ends the moment they get together” sort of thing, and instead is more of a “here’s a scene a few months later” ending, but that’s just personal preference. I’m sure it’ll be great however you decide to swing it.

PS. I’m calling it now, unprotected sex “not inside” Dragon stuffed animal with blue eyes pregnant Yang foreshadowing (jk obviously, but that would be wild)

Good story!

what do you mean no smut? weiss laid out the secrets of the shower in all but explicit detail. that's smutty enough.

Not sure why you decided to ram all these other relationships into this and apparently they are all bi or lesbian? Weird.

GOOD *clap* SHIT *clap*

MORE *clap* PLEASE *clap*

i beg

there's a clear solution to Yangs problems here.

threesome with Weiss and Jaune

I know you only made this as a casual smut thing, but if you do more chapters you could have Jaune slowly gain confidence and have Yang slowly feel more like “together-together” might be the way to go. Good smut, but you’ve got the potential for a charming small story in between the smut. Some of my favorite parts of smut fics are the rest of the cast realizing what’s happened and seeing the aftermath

This is good but there two things I don't like, firsts thing is why are Ruby and Blake a thing in this like what's the point it's just random, the second is when Yang pretty much said Jaune only has muscles because of Pyrrha, I highly doubt that's true Jaune clearly had muscles before coming to Beacon so it just seems like Pyrrha is just getting credit were she doesn't deserve it.

Will it just be smut or is there a possibility for Jaune and Yang to be together-together? 'Cause for some reason when reading this I remembered a BlakeXJaune fic called Lonely Nights where the two have a friends-with-benefits relationship but Jaune starts crushing on Blake, who only sees him as a form of stress relief (it gets really intense when Jaune says he doesn't want to continue and Blake gets forceful before she realises what she's doing).

I don't mind if you just want to right some lemons but I also wonder if you have bigger plans because this is good so far, but could be great with some plot and tension.