Alright so, constructive criticism time. I like the kind of story you’re aiming to tell, but it feels like you’re trying to rush it too much, slow it down a bit and add a bit more detail. Also, I love that you’re keeping track of the ‘mons on hand, keep that up. Finally, while I commend you for having this all up in two days, reading it all felt a bit like really only reading one or two chapters at most with you cutting off chapters just to make them more numerous rather than more complete.
If you have any questions or responses to the criticism above feel free to PM me.

Nice start, maybe make the chapters longer? It kills the immersion because it's so brief

Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.

They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.

They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.

They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting. Don't get me started on Arceus.

Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.

If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Unique Yet Sensible the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.

Best to remove it.

Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.

If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense and they been told by the admins to take it down.

Furthermore, if some goes on about us spaming accounts or something know its likely juat another troll so block them