I enjoyed your version of the episode better than the canon episode but I'm a sucker for Ronon and Jen stories.
Thanks for sharing your time and imagination

I enjoyed that very much! So happy to have some Keller/Dex stories to read... they make me smile.

So emotional - I love angst and you've done an excellent job at writing it.

Another good but frustration chapter. Love these two together.

What a hard situation ... somehow they need to stay together.

This is so upsetting! I love that they are already in a relationship. Great first chapter.

Who doesn't cry in the shower?! I mean seriously it's the best place to hide and have a good bawling session. This was such a brilliant chapter - so full of emotions - you can totally feel the heartbreak! 3

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Loved it! Pls continue to write. I am missing all the Ronon/Jennifer fics

This is a brilliant job from the plot bunnies! "..he didn't know who was holding up who"... LOVE IT.

Loved this. The part about Ronon teaching her the constellations just about broke my heart as did the part where she said she reassured herself that they were always looking up at the same stars whenever he was away.

You do a great job of revealing a lot about the various characters through little scenes, little actions, little thoughts. It's very impressive and it feels like I'm getting a lot of bang for my buck when I read what you've written (if that makes sense).

Their reunion at the end was also so so sweet. The involuntary noise that Ronon made when he caught her was such a great little detail, so visceral - it's clear he ached for her while they were away.

Thank you for sharing this little story with us! It was lovely.

My heart! Ow!

This was wonderfully done. I love the twist on the being together in the shower trope. Normally it's wet and steamy and sexy, but you made it raw, vulnerable, and heartfelt and I loved that.

I laughed at Elizabeth's line to Ronon, too.

Well done. Looking forward to a joyous reunion, hopefully.

This was a lovely chapter and a very tasteful fade to black haha. I loved this line: "And she'd said please. He could never deny her anything when she did that."

I also liked how they got in a fight, taking their anger at something else out on each other. It felt very real, which made their reconciliation even sweeter.

Looking forward to more.

I do love your Stargate Atlantis stories so thankyou very very much for continuing to write them. Ronon and Jen are the best and you write them so well, keep writing them please :-)

You're killing me! But love it and enjoying the ride of it all