Awww. What a wonderful way to end Act 1. A beautiful read through and through. I can't wait for you to continue this. A not-so T rated one-shot sounds interesting, so I'll be looking out. Thank you for writing this!

-Bean.

I actually adore this story. It's about time we got a ConnorxChloe fic that is actually updated. Can't wait to see the dynamic with Connor, Chloe and Hank.

-Bean.

Holy fucking shit on a toaster I just experienced the entire spectrum of human emotion in the blink of an eye and I was so not ready for the experience holy alien cow on a mountain with a cowboy hat. I am COMPLETELY unashamed to say that I burst into tears. I'm pretty sure I'm gonna turn out to be aromantic or something, but I don't scoff at true love and this broke my heart in so many ways it was so beautiful I hate you so much.

When I'm reading I already do my best to get completely in sync with the character, but the fact that you got me to experience so much of Connor's emotional experience in such a short amount of time was...just...I think I need to...Ow, my heart. It's... *Sounds of indescribable and inhuman anguish" I LOVE YOU.

Damn lol. Solid chapter!

Weeeeell, Eff you for breaking my heart.-

Just kidding, thank you for giving us this fanfic. ;_; Can't wait to see what'll happen next.

Hi there :]

Just read the first chapter and it was really cool. It was funny and still serious. I never thought about Chloe and Connor because Chloes was mere a toaster for me -" This sounds interesting, I've never read about Chloe before. I like your description of the surrounding a lot, I like your Connor, he sounds much like the one from the game but deviant now. Hank was awesome! I like the version where he "mutates" to a father figure but your grouchy version fits him better, it's funnier and it's more the Hank I know.
How you wrote when Connor couldn't analyze Chloes behavior was great :] This sounds a lot like a one shot, so I'm curious what in the next chapters will happen. Well done, so far.

Aww...poor Connor. Panic attacks are definately rough I'll say that...

I've never really thought about it before, the whole Kamski using Chloe in that Kamski test of his, how she's the first android that they had created, so you think he could have some affections for her, maybe? Yet he put her in such a risky situation, and if Connor shoots her in the game he does seem irritated but not really that affected by Chloe's demise... I guess he just fixes her up later or something, I don't know, the game manages to confuse me on the subject of androids and death. Maybe just deviants can't be brought back, because they have developed an individuality or something...

Anyway, this story is moving on pretty good, I wonder how their relationship goes from here. Thanks for writing.

Liking it!

Glad to see it’s continuing!

I really like the Connor's POV in this. There's a good amount of depth to it with his little observations, allowing the reader to feel how his inner world is like.

Chloe / Connor might never become my favorite pairing, but I'm open to the idea, especially when you write this well. Will there be more?

Not sure if this is meant to be a one shot but I really liked it. Should continue!