This is a piece of art!

Just finished this multi-chapter Epic 'fic you wrote! It is a GREAT read!

Though the part where the members of the Bat-Clan/Wayne Family are killed was a sad, but obviously, necessary part of this story, it was a thoroughly enjoying read.

One thing though, why did someone want that building destroyed? I do not recall a reason ever given.

Thank-you.

Anton

Very well done. It broke my heart then slowly made me feel better. I loved the epilogue. Very well done.

Omg the sweetest ending. What a beautiful family Dami and Tim have. Absolutely gorgeous. really perfect ending having all the heroes with their babies there and Jim. It was absolutely beautiful.

Omg this seriously is fantastic. I really love how close Dami and Tim are. I love how u have explained everything. Nothing has been left unsaid.
Uve covered all ur bases and really in depth told us the backstory how Dami did hate everyone. How he was the “devil” and how he changed. His thoughts when everyone died and Dami was Devo thinking he should have shown them he cared and his scare that they thought he didn’t.
How Tim and Dami got so close.

Even adding in Babs and the baby and explaining why she’s not in it. How Dick would have wanted her to move on.

Tim getting back into patrol.

The silent communication between Dami and Tim. The hidden messages behind their speech that only those two understand.

Jim’s knowledge in it all and his support.

The teams amazement at Tim and who he really is. And Tim scaring them. And even Dami the silent communication Dami knowing Tim waited til the last second and silently telling Tim never scare him again.

Damian’s sweet side with his animals. Then touching on how it’s cos with the animals Dami never felt as lonely.

ReAlly u covered everything. Wow.

Bahaha that wall stunt was great.

Oh my gosh. That rant of Tims was fantastic seeing Gordon and their chat. Knowing he knew and he was wrecked about it too. And then Tim and Dami re discussing to tell the team and Damian’s simple ill trust you ️

This is sooo good haha. Love how the team is slowly getting all the info they need to piece together the whole Wayne Bruce familyBat family.

Omg the whole Tim stealing things and seeing how long till they realise it’s missing. Or him using his room to safe keep stuff of Dick and Jason’s and then the throwing the knife at Dami haha.

Wow u really wrote it well with Tim explaining his backstory to his team.

Dami selling Tim out with the he didn’t sleeep comment

Wow sad they they didn’t die crime fighting . Wow poor family. Poor Tim and Dami.
Great story. Love Damian’s pets

Oh my gosh. Wow wow wow. Far out. The angst. The pain. Everything is written so well. And good to hear the backstory now of what actually happened.

Thoroughly good I love this concept you have. Guessing the bat family died in a fiery explosion is wha my thoughts are. Jay pushes Tim out the window. How did Damian get out ? Not sure if I read that or if we haven’t got to that yet.

Wow. Ur writing is a perfect mix of everything. Realistic and understandable ways to deal with death and grievance. How the characters act and interact and their characteristics. Really good.