Concept is nice, but writing is poor. Dialogue is almost robotic.

I demand an immediate update to this intriguingly amazing story my talented author!

weasly bashing and heir rings of safety from leglllimency
house of Slytherin magic conquest of lestrange vault

interesting
very good chapter.
keep writing.
blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.

Please update

Please update soon

I like it please continue

You're a fucking idiot.

You REALLY need a beta reader.

draco has start to make his army/cult good job boy.

An elf that can teleport an unicorn into and out of school with no problem and it also knows how to harvest an illegal and really rare creature in record time. not a good sign
Wandless magic, also not a good sign.
Magic eyes
unexplained mind reading skill
Casually going from the dungeons to the 7th floor, not a bad sign just weird.
Fucking the mom instead of obliviating her and going for ANYONE ELSE?
Sex slave mom
Plus the edgy sexy talk , maaan I haven't read something this cringy/edgy since Sir Lucifer Morningstar.

ok, SI automatically knows magic without doing anything. This is going to turn into a harem fic isn't it?

great great start and idea cant wait to read.

Now that drago is seen on potter side can he start to take luna , hermione and ginny to be mind slave sluts.

Again, I can understand canon-Draco’s false opinion of Harry... but not this Draco. Even Snape’s perfectly fitting false opinion of Harry bothered me, because it just felt like you using the chance to bash him. The problem with bash stories isn’t that it’s mean; it’s that the authors tend to exaggerate things to comical proportions to justify the hatred. You’ve gone to the next level, in that you still have the hatred but took no measures to actually justify it. He’s still capable enough in this to teach DADA to fifth, sixth and even seventh years, but you still call him useless. If he’s useless, then what’s the requisite for NOT being useless? Is Draco just mediocre, then, if someone of Harry’s skill is useless? It makes no bloody sense.

I can admit I’m biased towards Harry’s character, hence my annoyance but I’m fairly positive my opinion is perfectly valid even if the annoyance is excessive.