| Reviews for 11th Hour |
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Nannalyn chapter 1 . 3/7/2019 Although the most painful Darvey times are finally over (at least on the show), I don't need to be gentle in my review, because this is simply amazing! I enjoyed reading it very much! How you first describe Donna's pain and breakup (and Thomas' thoughts which were very insightful and authentic) and then switch to Harvey was very powerful. Harvey's inner monologue was very much in character and very well written! His despair and pain, and figuring out how much Donna means to him compared to everything else - so good! You created an atmosphere throughout the whole story with your words and descriptions that fit so well and sucked me in and I love when that happens! When they're finally together at his place and talk you totally did their characters justice. Your writing is so full of beautiful poetic expressions! Thank you for sharing this. I would love to read more from you! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 I loved it xxx |
Jean chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Loved it! It’s beautifully written, I wish the show could give us something like this! Thanks! |
krystalsteph chapter 1 . 2/28/2019 This was great! Im looking forward to reading more from you! |
Specter-Paulsen chapter 1 . 2/28/2019 I know I promised this review two days ago and I’m sorry for the delay! This fic is AWESOME and I loved it. You’re such a talented writer and I hope we’ll see more from you in the future! I loved the way you built it up, the switching of scenes between the two of them and their coming together in his apartment was so beautiful! I’m also very glad you joined our fandom family because you’re fun to have around! E xx |
DarveyfanCO chapter 1 . 2/28/2019 Beautifully written! Love it! |
carlota206 chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 What a wonderful story. Congratulations your writing is different I had never read anything like that, I really loved it and did justice to the characters very well indeed. |
Carebearmaxi chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Wow! Very beautiful! I’m so glad I read this be before the finale tonight, I am too full! |
analunogueira chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 I really love it! |
lilylynn chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Absolutely beautiful! Love your descriptions. Wonderful work! Thanks for sharing! |
SarahStevo chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Wow! You’re so talented! Loved every moment of this! You should be the writer of suits! ️ |
Evenstar1002 chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Loren! Wow! That was seriously your first Darvey fic? G! You pulled me right in at the very beginning and didn’t give me a change to breath until the end. The first words were so haunting and I felt so incredibly sad for Donna because she clearly didn’t want what was happening and it broke. my. heart. Thank God that was the end of it and them and TCM. And thank God she went to Harvey almost directly, finally wanting to sort everything out. And the way you let them do that. OMG! So good. So true to their characters. So perfect! Really, it couldn’t have been any better! ... She believes in him. She has faith in him. She loves him. ... aaaaah! I really... can‘t. God. Harvey‘s eyes and voice from when he thought she lost faith in him will probably haunt me for eternity and I can just imagine so clearly how he would feel when she finally tells him, that‘s why that moment of realization for him hit me right in the feels! Thank you! That‘s what I look for in fanfiction! Their conversation, the love between them, the tenderness with each other... man, you‘re really breaking my heart here! And making me cry: The future, a subject unknown. Realizing that life belongs only to those that truly embrace it, they hold on tight to each other. And like trapeze artists, they both jump into the incredible journey that is life. ... YES YES YES TO THAT! So perfect. I‘m so overemotional... this was perfect and now the wait for tonight is even harder! Thank you so much for this! |
BMBR chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Donna is always a step ahead in Darvey world. Her break up was real, without yelling or excuses, but the best part is Thomas not even asking why... he just knew. He just leaves. And that’s her prompt. I love the symbolism of trashing the sheets. Harvey’s car scene was great. I could hear him sigh and ask to go home. Sweet and sour. Keep writing :) |
lilapds chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Simply amazing! Wish I could write like that, it's beautiful! |
Jessicaa1567 chapter 1 . 2/26/2019 OMGGGGG THIS WAS SO GOOD AND SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL IM CRYING YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB WITH UR FIRST DARVEY FIC! Hope you can write more stories too ! Beautiful writing! So talented ! |