Of all the things that I thought could happen, that was not on the list, bumping into a past version of the Doctor with a younger Alvia, Rose and Jack. Obviously something happens to the younger Alvia so that she doesn't remember this happening on the future. I do wonder who the Grandpa was talking to when he was talking about the host but I guess we'll find out in the next chapter. Looking forward to when it is posted.

C'est parfait! Très different et magnifique. Merci pour sa et allons-y

Welcome back! I need the next chap now

That was really interesting to read. Something tells me the reason the armoured guards didn't register as life forms is because they are some kind of security system as well as being robots so not alive. It's sad that the Doctor doesn't feel he deserves having Alvia's friendship or love. And we have a cliffhanger ending that makes me eager to read more.

Oooohhh nice new story. Really good, poor Alvia. Thank you for the update and allons-y for now

That was so well written, you could feel the emotions that both Alvia and the Doctor were going through. Just to point out there's a small section close to the beginning where you use her instead of him and she instead of he. I also wanted to say that even though English isn't your first language you write in it so well. Looking forward to the next update.

Ooh no! Poor poor Doctor. Quick note their was slight
mistakes with pronouns 'he' 'she' when Doctor been comforted early on, seems they switched around. Once realised it made sense as had been thinking why Alvia suddenly crying. Thank you for the update and allons-y for now

Poor Doctor... I'd like to hug him too...

That was quite an event for Alvia, being kidnapped and almost sold into slavery but thankfully the Doctor was able to get help to stop this from happening. It's so sweet of the Doctor to have a necklace made for Alvia and I look forward to when he gives it to her. Looking forward to more.

Poor Alvia. Woohoo Doctor. Fantastic chapter. Thank you for the update and allons-y for now.

Painful! Poor Alvia! At least she had a sweet moment at the end.
I've found this fic and I was happy to find it updated! Thank you so much! I'm still struggling to update my own and I know it's not easy.

This chapter made me smile at all the fluff, I absolutely love it! I’m enjoying seeing their relationship developKeep up the good work!

That was such a cute chapter, I loved it. Especially the end when Alvia fell asleep in the Doctor's arms. At least Rose isn't there so she can't walk in on them cuddling. Definitely looking forward to more.

Sorry to hear that you weren't feeling good for a bit but I'm glad you talked to someone about it. That was a good chapter, the Doctor worrying about Alvia when they were separated shows just how much he cares for her. It was different with Alvia going with Mickey and Jake when they split up.

Absolutely brilliant! Seem to be reviewing chapters out of order but I'll pretend it is to be wibbily wobbly Timmy wimey. Fantastic chapter ooh those looks. Wow how did the Doctor not notice! Or did he just ignore, he can be so oblivious at times. Sent you a pm about something I have forgotten earlier in the story. Thank You so so much for the updates. Alvia is brilliant! Allons-y for now