I'm so excited for this rewrite and seeing Samira and Jiraiya get close again and Samira and Kisame 3 they're now my favorite friends with benefits. I was also hoping to see something more with Jiraiya and Samira as a thing too and I do love their conversations and banter and even when they fight. SO MUCH EMOTION.

As for this read, I'm having trouble making the changes you're making in between the bits that enter changed. Sometimes the characters reactions don't match with what the reader just learned. Like when Samira was in the hospital and wanted to leave, but we didn't get where the "bad ninja" came from or can connect it to when Ibiki took her away from the research facility. From our POV, they're treating her okay from the hospital and it seemed sudden she wanted to leave.

Anyway, I'm still looking forward to your work on thai story and cant wait to read beyond where Unlikely Love left off!

Ja ne!

I really like this. It's the different plot line you've created that has captured my interest. I have read 1 or 2 others that had characters coming from our world to the Naruto world but none were like this one. I wonder who she'll end up with, Might Gai or Percy-Sage (I cant remember how to properly spell his name)? I am a fan of both so win win for me. Lol.

Love it, can't wait to see what is different. Please leave the old story up too.

Super interesting! Can't wait to see where you take this~ :)

All right I'm interested. Waiting for the next chapter.

All right I’m interested. Let’s see how this goes.

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