Excellent story...

I thought it was interesting but they gave too much information to the Jackson's

That was really intriguing. I especially liked the way you let Sha're come back at the end. Good story.

this was cool!

*exhales in relief* For a minute there, I was positive that Ammonet would kill Claire and Mel in the "museum accident", and that Daniel would have known the whole time and not done anything, and there would have been angst. . .but you didn't.
Instead, we got a happy Daniel/Sha're story, and you know how I feel about those, with another amazing plot line, some truly hilarious dialogue (I am thinking mostly of Jack and Sam when they got to 1969), and some really touching moments. You hit this one out of the park and across at least three counties. Awesome job!

Really great story! Nicely worked in with the Sha're bit. Great how you had Daniel's parents kind of figure out that they're dead and all, because they were bright people. And then not giving them specifics. That was cool.

Clever and enjoyable. Thanks.

AW that was SO CUTE! say, have you ever read/seen The Shining?(seen the Mini-series, the movie was completly innacurate 'cept the ballroom scene) give nuthin' away, but i kept wantin' to call Daniel 'Doc'

Anyhoo, great story, but you shouldve broken into chapters, thats probably why u didnt get soo many reviews(but then what do I know about getting reviews, oh well like Machiavelli said you must stand in a valley to see the mountain:P) Anyhoos that was fun! thank you! now I must do my homework...

Great story, i loved it! :)

Very sweet story. I like it alot.

hey that was pretty good! i love happy endings!

Nice story and you got his wife back too. Good job it was nice.