This is one of the most original and enjoyable stories I have read , I hope it will be completed. Thanks for sharing it !

I thought the clean sweep company had gone out of business?

i'm skipping your summary of each chapter at the beginning as i don't want to spoil the surprise. And now you're putting the summary at the end of the previous chapter. Please don't.

i don't know if you've noticed but each time you refer to a biro it is written 'brio' in this and previous chapters.

Your ww is quite sinister, but we should expect that from the callous plans of the potters and sirius black to kill the mckinnons and sacrifice a young child and their 'friend' lupin from hogwarts as part of their plan to get rid of voldemort. So far its the purebloods who are uncaring about the muggleborns but how did lily get to be so uncaring? Will we learn its something in the acquisition of magic that turns you evil (explaining why non magicals habitually portray witches and wizards as evil?

I don't usually enjoy HP stories based at hogwarts following harry through first year etc but your story is truly different and interesting. This description of the flying lesson was masterful as it described the children's justifiable thrill at flying for the first time. Other stories of the flying lesson concentrate on malfoy's distractions and miss the sheer wonder of flying. Thank you. I hope harry is freed sooner rather than later from the machinations of the senile old coot.

So are you gonna update any time soon?

This story is fantastic. I liked how the events happen.

I am impress by your typo fixing, what the hell is flue powder. Last I remember is floo powder. The story was regulars an is going straight to the trash bin

I stop here, the crap is turning into too much shit. Bad story stupid writer

Wow. Please update soon this is really good

Absolutely loved this! Great characters, lots of fun and awesome goblins. I hope you’ll post more.
Thanks for a lovely read️

Your writing has improved over the chapters. Lovely battlescene prior by the way!

I love how you made your fanfic more upbeat and reassuring.

A most enjoyable uplifting story, well done.