Of course this story couldn't keep from using the damned shadow "clones" in sex. They are not fucking 100% clones and the story doesn't need them damnit.

So he didnt help him lose himself in lost he just somehow made him instantly okay with everything and referring to them as slaves?

"I feel we are ready to see our Master and declare our loyalty to him.

End of last chapter said she wanted a few more, what happened.

Sakura mentioned tsunade, I'd imagine hinata would think of kurenai and ino think of ayame after they ate there.

Suddenly she changed her mind?

Some of this stuff doesn't even attempt to make sense. Tenten and shizune calling her mistress by accident when they've barely even been felt up for a minute or two.

nice story, wish there was more girls, some titfuck action and even more chapters :)

Sweet, cute and a little twisted. I LOVE IT

I liked this story this Hinata would do everything for Naruto even this, friend can you put two stories one of Digimon with Tai-Mimi-Sora and the other of Pokemon with Ash-May-Serena with these two trios with chapters and lemons and if you can put without mental control.

HOTT! Keep going! And do you mind if I us this premise for a story?

the story is strange but really good.

falto algo mas quizás algunas otras mujeres o no se como ponerlo en palabras pero gran historia de todos modos.

Shadow clones really! Original should have fuck the ones their first time with him! You suck ass! Really hinata should suck Kiba off instead!

Make a dragon ball mind control fanfiction

You could say this was a happy ending. Naruto is no longer alone and finally experiences true love alongside his Hyuga princess and his loving servants (well slaves) at his side.

are you going to do a sequel fic for girls like kurostuchi and samui?

Definitely the best story you have in your profile as it has Hinata gathering a harem for Naruto.