Reviews for Finding Paradise
BrawlBroMario chapter 5 . 8/24
Really well written story. Minato's character is as spot on as you can get. The story is very intriguing and I do hope one day you update, even if it's years from now.
dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 5 . 6/9
please update this, its pretty good
Mernom chapter 5 . 5/30
Interesting story.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/27
Shame thier isn't more
stevesgaming87 chapter 5 . 5/4
Hope u didnt get corona and die I wana read chaptor 6
Kazragoth chapter 5 . 1/3
Now we have Alex going for Minato's impassive self so he can save Alice. Kinda funny since he has a Persona named Alice who is WAY different than Alex's Alice. But I wonder what Minato will do.

If anything, I want Alice to be saved. If Minato wants to make the world a better place, that would be a good first step. I'm really enjoying this series so far! And I'm eager to see how this story goes.
Im a guest chapter 5 . 10/21/2019
Definitely a save and a follow. Really interesting premise as of currently. Cant wait see more.
The Richmaster chapter 5 . 7/29/2019
Elizabeth somewhat alien perspective definitely fits the situation and considerin how she can be somewhat influenced by her surroundings, it makes sense for her to do.
Minato's curing Heretic Gods of the madness that comes from rebelling against their myths is certainly not something that I was expecting or have seen done before; that is something I'm curious to see where it goes.

The part on Alex was a really good way to show how people can be effected by the thought of losing someone; I don't think Minato is likely to decline, though I do hope he mentions something like school being out on a certain day.
It does seem odd that they are apparently unaware of his connection to "the Eighth"
The Richmaster chapter 4 . 7/29/2019
The talk between Godou and Erica definitely worked for their respective mindsets and belief

And it's interesting that Kaoru died here; I get the feeling that this was actually Elizabth's warning to her to stop interfering since she would know that Minato would revive her
Minato's being sent in place of Elizabeth seems perfectly in-character, though I'm curious what kind recordings might be available... it was kind of a surprise to me that he won so easily
The Richmaster chapter 3 . 7/29/2019
I particularly liked Minato's talk with Godou; his experience is useful in relating to the trouble but the way he's new means that he doesn't have any agenda or bias that may cause Godou to trust his opinion less

Elizabeth's authoriy being of the 'manifest an avatar' variety definitely makes a lot of sense for her and I'm curious to see what a Hime Miko would think of Mischeif

the bookstore is a pretty fun idea too and the name definitely fits
The Richmaster chapter 2 . 7/29/2019
Okay, so Elizabeth technically isn't actually a Campione but that makes sense and doesn't really change anything about how interesting the idea is
The interactions and explanations were; especially the one with Pandora and the casual rapport with Minato
I'm looking forward to seeing more "local" reaction
The Richmaster chapter 1 . 7/29/2019
This was an amazing start; Elizabeth taking the centre stage in regards to being the person people look to is something that I haven't seen done often but it feels like it really works here. Her odd nature makes her feel more campione than Minato

You've done a great job with the personalities so far; I've definitely enjoyed what I've read so far and Yuri's thoughts on Elizabeth were great
Guest chapter 5 . 7/27/2019
Humans...
They will never stop wanting more
More
More
More
Until minato break
RunDownLord chapter 5 . 7/26/2019
Amazing! I'm really enjoying this one so far. So fun to read
PieKnight chapter 5 . 7/23/2019
Really enjoying this story so far. I love Elizabeth and Minato's interactions. Looking forward to the next update!
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