Hello Marvel! I've just finished re-reading this story for the third time...still enjoying it immensely! That line in Angelo''s when Sherlock explains "I can always count on you to do that, John" gives me an ache every time...beautiful! I am so very keen to hear the rest of your story! I hope Rosie is going to be alright, and that John puts it all together finally ;) Good luck in your writing...it's really truly wonderful. You have an immense talent!

A very promising start! Iiked the interactions between the main characters, and I could really hear their voices here and there, e.g. when Mrs. Hudson goes "not your Babysitter" or Sherlock complaines about "people!" :-) I also found the scenes between Sherlock and John to be quite believable for two friends who are treading carefully to rediscover their bond after some very disturbing experiences. the case in this first part is sold a bit short; I know it's supposed to bei just a backdrop for the introduction, but Sherlock solving a case without at least a little deduction monologue and even without making sure to get the culprits behind lock and key felt OCC to me. The same is true for the scene between Sherlock and Molly; imho the much softer Sherlock from season 3/4 would have been more sensitive than that. That bringen said, I very much look forward to your next Update! Just one more thing: the text would be much easier to read If the different scenes (e.g. one between mycroft and the Woman and the next in Baker Street) we're somehow graphically seperated, by two more returns or a dotted line or something like that. Thanks for posting!

Who is the hidden other?

When will the next one be written? I think it’s great. Hollywood should be all over this one.