Love this can’t wait for the next chapter

Jaune: "I'm gonna kill the King of Heroes."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Gilgamesh would eat Jaune's C-rank ass for breakfast. I understand he wants revenge, but he needs to keep his goals realistic. Saber or Assassin will deal with the king, he can focus on Neo or Cinder. Though even then those are losing battles.

uff that luck, I thought that this story had already been set aside. I quite like history. I hope the next update does not make you wait so long xD haha.
this story is very promising

It feels like ruby and jaune are going down two routs from fate ruby seems to be going down an Unlimited blade works/heavens feel. Now how you ended things right here it feel like jaune’s diving head first into the utilitarian path under snow my goal is to kill whatever endangers what I have left. He’s Basically going full kiritsugu. Hell I could see him giving saber flashbacks and him planing the deaths of every servant and person who stands in his way the guy has to be broken. I could see the dichotomy between ruby and jaune being a big driving force from here on out and it’s just so good. Your story has me so unbelievably amped I can’t get it across well enough in words.

Archer y ishitar
Había leído antes un manga donde archer sirve de sirviente ishitar, donde el le dice que proteja el cuerpo que tiene por que es de una persona muy preciada para el.

Angra mayu se apoderó del cuerpo de shiruo para que sirva como recipiente siendo uno de los pocos humanos vivos en la ciudad.

I am only halfway through first chapter but there is one flaw wich is nagging me, Gaia does not sent the Counter Guardians they are sent bei Alaya. Gaia simply destroys mystery /unatural phenomena, Alaya sents uses the Counter Force and the Counter Guardians pls correct this, rest looks o far promising.

Atalanta como sirviente de Adam.

Gaia o alta intervendrán mandando más contra guardianes o archer es el único.

Can't wait for the next chapter

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Dang, is Lancer here yet? damn since Ishtar is Archer can we get Parvati as Lancer? That be a very nice Reunion!

Pft...yeah ok kid go ahead and off yourself because that what your only going to get. your not Emiya, nor have the power UBW and no arsenal that worthy only a shield and sword thats it, hope it enough to deflect (impossible) Enuma Elish because your just going to become a bloody paste and all you give is empty threats sure you have a servant but that it

Cuando la aparición dé karna?

This chapter was a bit rough in the use of capitalization and punctuation, but it was good.
Thinking about it, all Assassin servants are the most dangerous threats in a grail war Emiya especially. If Emiya wields the blade or knife of a master assassin he can imitate their skills. And Assassin’s can kill off the masters the quickest. The problem is that no one ever uses the assassin servant well. Kirei wasn’t bloodthirsty at the start of the 4th war when he still had Assassin, but if he had been then he could have won.
Also, Archer is the most experienced Assassin or warrior in this grail war. With basically eternity to be Alaya’s counter guardian and countless assassinations to threats of humanity he could very easily win this war.
But he got stuck with the worst possible master for him. Ruby.
Ruby’s care for human life prevents her from using Emiya to his best capabilities. There isn’t much a normal human, even a human with aura, can do against Gae Bolg, which in F/GO Archer states that he could trace the spear and use it.
It took Rho Ais, or Saber’s luck plus Lancer not going all out for either of the servants to survive the spear.
It’s such a shame that Ruby won’t let Emiya target other masters, at least not until it is too late.
At this point Jaune would be more willing to have Emiya kill masters than Ruby.
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
And stay healthy too!