why is there a abrupt change in perspectives in the last paragraph?

please try to stick to one type of perspective. if there is a need to change to 3rd person perspective to reveal details use a line break.

also try to use only past tense when narrating.

you used "well enough daydreaming now as I am walking towards the hall where the crowning of thor is taking place" in narration which should have been "as I walked" or "as I was walking"

infact there was no need to include "as" in that sentence at all,
"I stopped my day dreaming and walked towards the hall" would be better

Although I would have written "I stopped reminiscing about the past and walked towards the hall"

Present tense should only be used in dialogues and thoughts, unless you're writing it entirely in present tense but that's just weird to read.

a trident for your main weapon...its not terrible I guess, better than a sword. I would reccomend a pollaxe or halberd though. also it would be smart to have a sidearm. a backup weapon, usually a sidesword or longsword

katana...you serious bro, come on. katana aren't that great. Use a longsword. it's way better than a katana. actually instead of a sword, you should be using a pole arm. polearms are much better than sword, use a pollaxe. it's probably among the best weapons

It is a great idea, I can't wait to read more
Really well written but I would have liked if u have stretched the Loki 1000 years a bit more and explained his character in depth

love it so far. IF tou do the hydra agent rout go the world dominating rout. Not nazi believe but the desire to rule the world, also, watch agents of shield. You can take this so much more in depth if you watch them first.

lol

go nebulaaa

he livessss

hope he takes his island to create a planet of his own

where to put it...himmm

ikillllll

giver her the super soldier serum

hope he makes a celestial body

yesssss

capsule it! save Momma!