This really got me interested. I hope to see more in the future.

Make sure nothing bad happens to Sora!

This looks great I never thought I’d see a fanfic between Angel Blade and Kingdom Hearts. Please continue the story I wanna see what happens next:

Remove the overuse of A/N and cease using second person when writing. The story will improve if you 'show don't tell'

Ah Angel Blade, pretty much my first hentai; and Kingdom Hearts a favourite game series I love. When these two properties are put together it leaves only one thought in mind. What have you done?! (JK) Actually I do enjoy the premise of this fic and hope it is continued, good luck and best wishes.

Never thought I’d see this crossover happen, but okay. Sora is gonna learn real quick how this world works. I can’t wait to see what happens!

Is Sora getting a harem? Hopefully he finds out who the good guy are

Let the chaos begin

Oh my Kingdom Hearts... I'm interested yet somehow feel sorry to see how Sora will fare in hentai world.

He doesn't know what sex and rape are yet sexually aware of female body paints him deeper as target of villainess who wants to take advantage of his innocence.