Nicely done.

You don't have to rush for us...trust me. We can wait!

Merry Christmas.

Interview Question (channeling someone else's inner "old-fogey" as I haven't got one):
"Aren't you guys a little 'young' to be having a baby? I mean really! What's this world coming to? You're supposed to be role models! Now I have to have 'the talk' with my grandson. Thanks a lot!"

I think...*sighs*(can't believe I'm saying this) but give him a redemption arc,one where he gives the butterfly miraculous without our heroes ever knowing who he was

I think he should redeem himself. Grief is a powerful emotion and can make people do terrible things. I would like to see this grandchild pull him back into where he should be.
For him to see what he can have and possibly start to heal.

Redeem him! I can’t bear to see Adrien die in the next chapter!

2)
a) torches and pitchforks
b) tar and feather
c) strap him to a rocket
d) Pluto's not far enough away from Adrien

(but I'm a bit bias right now)

"Chat, I am your father?" or "Come to the dark side... we have cookies."

OK... neither of those are direct quotes...

I'll be honest. Gabriel doesn't deserve a redemption arc. BUT this is YOUR story, and YOU choose how it goes. If you want Adrien to have a father who has at least a passing resemblance as a decent human being... then you write that. The thing that I love the most about fan fiction is that it often gives me things that I never knew I needed in my life!

at first I thought it was quite fast the way it was evolving... but then I came to a part where my tears where almost falling... So... I think this totally should be the next sk chapter.
gonna re-read this.

love this chapter ... So many emotions going on
Keep up the good work

I feel like this should be chapter 19,it makes sense in context and it's also very HawkMoth finding out wasn't great,they are finally together

I would put this as the next chapter in SK firstly cause it’s obviously not inappropriate and secondly because the younger readers (who don’t read the plus) would probably be pretty lost. I loved this chapter and am ecstatic that she Finally confessed. Hopefully thing will be all good between them now... Once again, Thanks for writing and stay Miraculous!

If this 𝗶𝘀𝗻'𝘁 chapter 19 i will literally die

I mean, what you do for chapter 19 if you didn't use this? My thought is that it's a great 19, but if you wanted to go a different route, then that's also fine.

This was excellent, though. I do wo der what Gabriel plans after this.

CT.

New to the 2 stories. I love it. I don’t comment much but I wanted to send my support.