I just finished reading The Best Mistake and Consequences and I absolutely love it. I know I’m going to come back and read this over and over. Keep up the great work.

I enjoyed the fact that background was disclosed and not being familiar with Bleach, having the circumstances and relationships of the characters vividly disclosed was a plus. To feel the tension oozing from the room was a great way to start off the adventure and keen way of showing just how strong feelings can go after a particularly gory battle was over. Thanks for sharing!

All the kids got Rangiku’s heart and courage most certainly but they also got something from Gin that shines through also

Toshiro genius power
Kinta mischief total devotion to the one they love
Yukiko ability to read people the ability to terrify people with just a look, she’s like Gin when he drops his smile the words ‘RUN’ just go through your head

Never try to take over a person’s mind when they are someone like Toshiro, being frozen and most likely shattered into millions of tiny pieces was probably the kinder then what else he could have done

Thank goodness Aizen is dead cause I wanna see what happens when Gin calls Toshiro cute

I knew Mayuri would want to compete with Shunsui when it came to grandchildren I just knew it

Ichimaru tag team!

Cannon fourth Espada vs. Squad 4 captain that’s a terrifying matchup

Shinji and the rest of the Vizards I wonder I wonder how they would react to Gin being married to Rangiku and their children especially Shinji cause he was Gin’s captain

Awesome chapter

Just imagining Rangiku’s words coming out of Nemu’s mouth is hilarious

At first I thought maybe Kenpachi or Yamamoto would take Tosen out but if it’s Mayuri that would be such an ego blow

Nanao and Kira wer both amazing here

Given how strong I know Ulquiorra is I hope Kira can fend him off long enough for back up to arrive

Was kinda hoping Soifon would take out Tosen but if he dies by Kenpachi I can live with that to