| Reviews for Negligentia: Optare |
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Freudentraene chapter 1 . 10/9 I really liked the three stories! Great work! Any chance for a continuation, e.g. Harry talking with his parents and brother? Anyway, thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. |
JoseLuises chapter 1 . 9/26 Incredible, it was incredible and not only this story but the other 2, I liked all three and it would be good to see a continuation, at least when he confronts his parents, to close his past and receive his present and future without any repentance. |
The Sherlock Of Fanfiction chapter 1 . 9/7 This was really good, more thank I expected. |
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 8/24 Seems that Harry is finally starting to let go of the past, which can only be done by confronting it. |
josh chapter 1 . 8/16 Just found your stories yesterday and there really good. i like a well written non bwl story and am hoping to see more chapters of it soon. would like to see an interaction with the potters and their reactions to his upcoming wedding. ill be sure to check back for more |
K chapter 1 . 7/17 Quite a way removed from the original, but most enjoyable. |
bdwilliams3 chapter 1 . 6/4 Love the story and how it frames growth, change and those who do or don’t. Would be interested in reflections of lily and Jakob about Harry and Daphne (perhaps at or after wedding? Or at Jakob’s wedding?) Regardless, sound all stories very insightful! |
redstickbonbon chapter 1 . 5/11 I've enjoyed this series. Happy I stumbled upon them. |
prince of the seas chapter 1 . 5/9 Excellent.. |
GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 4/20 Thank you for completing this story, is the series complete? Been following HP Fanfics for a long time, after soo many great fics died before they were finished, I only read completed stories or series. Please continue. |
Aaronssthans chapter 1 . 2/23 Amazing! |
Brynmor chapter 1 . 2/22 If you ever do another, you should have a discussion where Harry considers taking Daphne's name, instead of her becoming a Potter. I think he's ready for that. |
Ghostwriter71 chapter 1 . 2/8 I very much enjoyed all three of the stories in this series. Your skill as a writer is refreshing. And I do hope you continue this story-line... Even if we have to wait another four years. ;) |
TehStorm chapter 1 . 1/20 Great chapter,tough i still hope you will do a chapter on the potters as you stated that they are no longer really celebrities,just an important family so i hope to see their reactions to harry getting married,hopefully they learn it from sirius and don't get invited at all as neglecting a child is awful. |
Lilac and Lilies chapter 1 . 1/8 It’s a good set of stories you have here. I I would like to read about how the Potters find out about Harry and Daphne’s wedding. Does Sirius tell them or does Harry do it himself? Do they go or will their prejudice get in the way? I’m curious to what you have planned next |