Continue this fic please I love the idea!

Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter.

First, a little side note, in chapter 2 you talk about Tom Bombadil (I think) and I'm pretty sure you forgot to edit the paragraph because it sounds a bit weird.

Now to the story: Interesting premise. Most stories are centered around the Book or Movie events and with Harry, you have Sirius and the war against the Witch-King. Lots of potential for new stuff here!

I think you could make the magic a bit more magical rather than what it is right now. Less he says the words and something happens and something like the few scenes of magic we see in Shadow of Angmar. That fic might also be good to read to get a feel for what the LotR world and how to write it. Right now we have the confused Sirius but it's lacking a bit LotR feeling in my opinion. It's hard to put in words.

All in all, I think it's a story with lots of potential but also some potential for improvement! Looking forward to seeing more!

excellent work

T

Nice start here.

›› Five days of riding...
Since Sirius hasn't been in the saddle for 15 plus years (if ever), his butt and legs will be about ready to fall off. Prolonged horseback riding takes some getting used-to. ;)

Anyway, lots of fun potential for the kind of magic shop a scion of Black could open. From the fun "The frogurt is also cursed" to even being the progenitor of Rorschach's Blot's Magic/Travel shops...

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

I look forward to where this goes, the culture differences are great.

Oh wow...far back...wait...isnt this around the time middle earth witnessed the biggest MOUNTAIN size dragon that puts Smaug to shame?

Still liking the tone.

As for the red wizard/robes.. There is a reason why no modern battle uniforms are red. AKA "Kill me first" red, or "Kill me dead red" :)

So looks like Sirius might soon have as much action as he might want, and/or soon start jumping at shadows.

Short and perhaps a bit of silly wish fulfillment, but enjoyable so far.