| Reviews for Hurricane Love |
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Koikuroneko chapter 7 . 6/25 Oh my God, for real the smut in this piece is just absolutely delicious. The foreplay, the sexual tension, everything, I mean EVERYTHING is seriously on point. Story-wise, this feels so natural, so hot, yet so sweet. Ranma and Akane really feel like how Ranma and Akane would behave, but in a slighlty grown up way, which absolutely makes sense, I totally can see their childish retorts, competitiveness just morph into this sort of tension and playful pasión between both. The locked up, dark environment just propells the story so well and your wide vocabulary just wraps this story in a very imagination stimulating ribbon. I adore this so much you made me resurrect my 2012 dead fanfiction account just to write this. And nooo! Never ever apologize because you wrote something you wanted to write sweetie! Its your story, no apologies needed, period. Just write and love what you do, no matter what ship or genre is, just enjoy it, that's what matters |
PurseMonger chapter 7 . 6/2 This was a great update! Don’t worry about what people say, you write the story you want to write. If that means a chapter with Ryoga and Ukyo don’t apologize for it. |
PurseMonger chapter 3 . 6/1 So one criticism is that you’ve fallen into the fannon idea that it’s obvious that Ryoga and P-Chan are the same. In the manga neither Kasumi or Nabiki know that P-Chan is Ryoga. It’s obvious to us as readers but not Akane. I hope that you make Ranma own up to his part in keeping the secret and not just blame her for not paying attention. Also, Ryoga eating pork buns is...just..wrong. ;D |
PurseMonger chapter 2 . 6/1 Nabiki was def a bit out of character here. She would never be that affectionate, even to family. But as she’s a side character, it really doesn’t bother me. Great teasing up their exploration of each other. Ranma felt a little OOC here but if you didn’t change him a little, nothing would happen. I just hope Akane put her panties back on before she went to the living room. |
PurseMonger chapter 1 . 6/1 Great first chapter! I’m loving the dynamic between the two. You’ve got a smooth writing style I really enjoy! |
pahlee chapter 7 . 5/24 Happy to see you updating, love your story in its entirety and waiting anxiously for the next update! |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/23 Yesssssssss! Wonderful, beautiful, gorgeous! I just love it. Thank you so much and thank you for the hope for more to come. Please don't let us wait too long. |
Kaysachan chapter 7 . 5/22 Sorry for not leaving a review in the last chapter, I didn't mind that interlude with RyogaxUkyo it was nice, I ship that couple. This was a nice chapter, I'm glad Ranma and Akane are finally together and relieving stress lol |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/17 Yay for UkyoxRyoga! I loved it so much. |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/14 Since when was this a fanfiction about Ryoga and Ukyo? -_- Boredom. I won't even read this chapter. I hope there won't be another one about them... |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/13 How could you?! Waiting sooooo long, feeling sooooo happy that you uploaded a new chapter and than sooooo sad it was about Ukyo and Ryoga! Don't get me wrong, you write beautifully and it was a very hot scene, but couldn't wait till we had a really hot happy end for Akane?! She must feel desperate by now! Please update soon! |
Host chapter 6 . 5/13 How disappointing ;_; a chapter on Ryoga and Ukyo... frankly, I really don't care about this couple. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/5 Pleeeeeeeaaaaaase moooooooooore! You can't leave us hanging and Akane, too! So so good. I love it, that you didn't describe Ranma as the super lover who can last hours even on his first time with a partner. Really lovely, well done! |
pahlee chapter 5 . 5/4 You know what's funny, I got this update and and severe thunderstorm warning at the same time. The rain is literally pelting outside my window right now as I read this, talk about coincidence! That aside, I loved the update and I absolutely just adore everything about it. Cannot wait for the next update! |
Kaysachan chapter 4 . 5/2 I'm loving this story sooo much, can't wait for them to finally release some stress in the dojo |