I like this fanfic and hope you update in the future

i want to die.

we stann a grim king.

UPDATE THIS PLEASE

atlas uses the relic of creation to fly

tyrian is teal's dad

This fic is abandoned

Fairly boring chapter. I like Tiel and his adventures but this chapter is mostly a repeat of the canon with Tiel adding his opinions every now and then and looking like a third wheel.
I guess this is really the end of this fanfic.

Tyrion is way waaaay too overpowered in this chapter considering how he and Qrow were able to fight somewhat evenly and Tiel was easily able to play around with Qrow with his portals.
I really hate it when authors make the villans way too overpowered to make things unnecessarily difficult for the Mc.

The whole meeting Raven's bandit group, running out of energy, getting caught by them and them being bound by Raven is so forced that I almost want to drop this story right here and now.
But you're a pretty good writer so I'll ignore this whole forced plot thing and try to move on with the story.

How is he not able to sustain a pen tip sized portal for a moment when he was able to create one large enough to capture a Beowolf.
I don't know what I'm missing.

The second I saw a sly cooper reference I decided to read the whole story and like it.

CHAPTER NAO PLZ

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

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