Reviews for Heart Slayer
TitanGuest912 chapter 18 . 7/29
Can't wait for more!

You should adjust your genre tags. They currently do not match what your story has portrayed so far.
Dcraus chapter 18 . 7/28
The movie called Goblin Crown is finally available on Crunchyroll
fourtyfourb chapter 17 . 7/26
I want Goblin slayer to tell Guild Girl and Priestess the detailed story of his past like he did with High Elf Archer. I’m curious to see their reactions and how they would treat him after hearing it. I assume Cow girl already kinda knows what happened since she was his neighbor.
fourtyfourb chapter 18 . 7/26
I really want to see more Guild Girl and Goblin Slayer, I imagine her semi stalking him to know more about him.
Mewtwo-TheLoneShadow chapter 18 . 7/23
Ah, suprb to see this back, and Rhea got what he deserved too! Loved lil Priestess' confession, she really is just too pure. XD The failed assassination and brutal execution was a nice touch!
X chapter 18 . 7/22
Really liked this chapter
Lost Aragami chapter 18 . 7/23
Ah yes. Goblins.

Numerous grammar mistakes aside, I like what you're doing with the story so far. It has a good amount of harem antics mixed in with notable action scenes and a suitable amount of foreshadowing. GS has been OOC, but I guess harem antics can do that to you.

You might want to flesh out the girls' characters a little more though. They can get a little too 2D for my liking, and that tends to kill a story for me.

Love the interactions between GS and Hero btw. Can't get enough of that.
Evowizard25 chapter 18 . 7/21
Alright this chapter was a blessing. I still love how Sword Maiden is so forward with him. Sleeping with him in the nude. How can you not love her. Definitely a keeper.

Of course the highlight of this chapter came with little Priestess. I've always loved her and she is utterly adorable. Here that adorableness went through the roof. Her confession and hug with Goblin Slayer was just so much to take in and I loved every second of it. It really did feel like she put her heart and soul into that letter. Certainly one of the biggest highlights so far in the story. Adored it.

Now the date with High Elf Archer was interesting. She's certainly cute as well, such as hiding her face in her hair. Did not expect Rhea to interrupt it. Of course he interrupted Guild Girl and GS's 'date' in canon, so it seems it's a tradition for him to mess up one of GS's dates in any universe. Still though, hopefully the other people in the restaurant can vouch for their innocence. Although since you may have hinted at the elf waitress knowing HEA's being a princess, they might get a pardon anyways.

Can't wait to read what happens next. (And yes, good start on your other story. Will read that eagerly as well.)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20
This is awesome
Guest chapter 18 . 7/20
This chapter was amazing!
Guest chapter 18 . 7/19
I’m drunk on medication due to my sinus infection, so I can’t think straight. Love your work
Orion chapter 18 . 7/18
More Please!
Scarecrow141 chapter 18 . 7/18
nice chapter
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 18 . 7/18
Well, that was a surprise update. If you wonder why I took a while. I had some errands to run today so that is why it was nearly one day that I took some time. As for the replies, that’s indeed one thing. But hey, some bonding with his male team members can’t hurt.

As for the whole questions. Those are fun and well, I am not reading it either. Got some other stuff going on now. Just saying. I like what you are doing now. And he isn’t blind. But the way that he sees women, that is no change. Although it isn’t for him to decide who gets on that list.

With the begin of it, there might not be a lemon but damn, is that steamy. It’s clear on how Sword Maiden is making her claim and no one can really stop her. It’s still fun indeed to read about this. So I am happy to see how this one went.

The Priestess also gotta hurry up to make her claim or at least, get her feelings out towards him. That was one nice thing to read and pretty much in character if you don’t mind me saying. Really nice take on the whole characters on that. But wit the scouting, that was fun. It is indeed something. The date was with the Tsundere so forgive me if I am skipping on that.

Some downtime didn’t hurt though and the talking was one thing. It was one shock. I like what you have done here and well, the skills of High Elf Archer didn’t dim. I didn’t expect that you have this whole thing. and well, that was one surprise to see him around. I do wonder how the next chapter might go down.

Sword Maiden doesn’t indeed need not to confess but with the two other girls, that might be some change yes. The High Elf Archer and Priestess met her, they didn’t. I really look forward to that one. Although a real confession it will not be.

I can tell you this. You are much kinder with the characters compared to the original creator. Just saying. I look forward to your next chapter.
Saluut.
guyNumber23 chapter 18 . 7/18
Ah, HEA, tsundere stubbornness at its finest. Also, Priestess could weaponize her cuteness because I nearly had a heart attack with that sweet confession.
Still not sure if the big bad guy here is the same dark elf from the manga/LN but I suppose yes since the rhea was there. If they are going to look at the sewers again, what are the chances of the Hero party joining them to help with the magics and all?
Oh well, a great chapter indeed. Keep the good work and please do take some rest, my friend. Rooting for my girl Sword Maiden as always~
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