| Reviews for A Matter of Circumstance |
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   ScarOfHerobrine chapter 6 . 9/18 NOICE man you never get tired with these adventures...awesome! Makes me want to write a few, but you seem to have all the ideas XD Thank you for writing these for us! |
| Ne'ith5 chapter 6 . 5/10 It was all good I really enjoyed it! I felt sorry for the spirit even though what he did was doing was wrong. |
| Letitgo9 chapter 6 . 2/27 I really enjoyed this story |
| Letitgo9 chapter 1 . 2/27 Very interesting so far |
| She-Elf23 chapter 6 . 10/26/2019 Great story! Definitely had a different twist to it...oh what those boys get themselves into! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/17/2019 Somehow it slipped past me that you had updated! I’m glad I checked! I’m so glad they are out of the swamp, and what a creative way to end it! I wasn’t sure how they were going to get out of this one, but they did, which was awesome. Can’t wait for your next story! |
| AraneltheSilvan chapter 6 . 4/1/2019 Love this story and am excited and waiting for the next. I will continue to read as long as you write. I am particularly looking forward to the assassins. ;) |
| Lusse Eldalion chapter 6 . 3/31/2019 Noooooo! It's over? Oh dear, what am I supposed to do until you publish your next masterpiece? Lol, I can't wait to read about the caves, assasins and butterflies (not necesarily in that order)! I loved this. The spirit was really creepy, though the man's story was sad. Thank the Valar he did not get Legolas, and the four of them managed their way out. Poor Aragorn, I bet he must have felt completely hopeless when Legolas started talking alone. I'm sure Legolas must have learnt his lesson now and won't be opening misterious boxes anytime soon... or getting into marshes. Mellon-nin, this was awesome as usual. You should write something bad from time to time just so we know you are not a writting goddess or something. I can't wait to read more from you! |
| wotumba1 chapter 6 . 3/31/2019 good story |
| Batman91939 chapter 6 . 3/31/2019 Amazing story ! Was creepy & worrying throughout , with splashes of humour & lots of comradeire between the four of them. So very well written ! The ending didn’t feel rushed at all , & the very last lines “The marsh remained gnat-infested, cold, and wet, but only fifteen miles long.” really struck home the creepy / mysterious nature of this story. I got chills when I read it , which is awesome ! Great work overall ! |
| Jaya Avendel chapter 6 . 3/30/2019 I love the wistfulness and wisp-like spirit Legolas connected with and the bickering as the elves and Aragorn bickered. The ending was both humorous and fully closing. May the words flow! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/30/2019 I like it! Kind of mysterious. Can't wait to see what you write next. No pressure. |
| UnnamedElement chapter 6 . 3/30/2019 Sorry for not logging in... I loved that last paragraph! Chilling, and such a classic ending to this genre of folk tale turned supernatural-horror story. Lovely! Great read. Thanks for writing and posting, and for all the hours I’m sure you put into this project! It is appreciated. :) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/30/2019 Lovely ending! I didn't find it rushed at all. The only thing I would point out is that, when the twins and Estel are collecting the venom, you say 'bowel' instead of 'bowl'. XD Great job with this story! I really enjoyed it! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/30/2019 Another great story! Sorry to see it end. Can’t wait for the next one. Legolas and caves sounds like fun. |
