great history dude you should keep it coming they are good

Hi Jauneforever,
I hope you are doing well, and I really hope you come back to this story one day!

Awsome story, I love the interactions between Jaune and his servants and Pennny. Heck even the one they have with Zelrech who looks more and more like a crazy uncle for Jaune.

Kiritisugu and Dante might like Jaune more then I expected considering the way he thinks this chapter.

Just wait until Jaune encounters his old "friends" again. Avenger is just waiting for it.

Really do miss you and your RWBY fics, please come back soon, everyone just keeps on doing Arkos even in crossovers and I'm getting sick of it.

Oh here’s a fun lesson: learning what personal space means and the new feeling of blushing/embarrassment when touched by your crush. Penny gets in too close in excitement and topples then over, Jaune in typical anime protagonist fashion ends up with his hand on her chest and they are in a compromising position.

She adjusts to finally knowing what embarrassment/blushing feels like

And here we have yet ANOTHER author who has disappeared for over a year with zero explanation. If your dead, may you Rest In Peace. If not, better have an explanation

The end?! NOOOO YOU CANT LET IT JUST END LIKE THIS . without retribution or and Homepage... please i beg of you... dont let this wonderfull Story die...

I have to admit...I've got mixed feelings on this fanfic. It is incredibly well done, and I am loving the plot. I love seeing Jaune get a boost like that.

However...I do dislike how easily Alistair was able to just slot in there like that. NVM him brainwashing RWBY and NPR, it was that no one, at all, found any of that strange. Why did no one question how easily this guy came in like that, and suddenly make people act differently from how they normally do? It just seems a bit unrealistic that Ozpin or Glynda or Port, having been teaching these kids, seeing them work together, and stuff like that, wouldn't find it odd for how some of them, namely Pyrrha and ruby, reacted towards Jaune here. I'm just hopeful that Alistair's BS (I have major problems with brainwashing) get's shut down in the not so distance future, if/when you start writing this fanfic again.

Admittedly, given what Dantes said, I have some idea what might drive Jaune to be ready to finally work with him, and I'm hoping it's not as bad as what I'm thinking. I'm hoping that, at worst, it is because he finds out Alistair brainwashed the others, not because Pyrrha dies or something. I'm an Arkos fan, and even if you don't have Jaune and Pyrrha be together in your fanfic, I'm hoping at least she survives because she deserved far better then what Rooster Teeth did to her.

Now, away from the bad stuff. I do absolutely love seeing Jaune get powered up, but what's more, I love some of your Servant choices. Mordred and Fran, specifically. Mordred is honestly a hoot to me, and Fran is one of my all time favorite Servants. I'm admittedly sad that Salem got her hands on Jack, another of my favorite Servants, but we'll see where that eventually leads. I also found what happened with Penny to be really interesting, and I look forward to seeing where it goes in the future. Such as if she'll be with Jaune, though I think she, at least mentally, has competition with the female Servants helping out Jaune.

PLease keep up the excellent work!

Awesome

Please update!

Really hope the story gets updated soon I’m interested in how this will play out

Holy hell. It's been a year since this was updated and yet I still keep re reading the fanfic. Still waiting for the next update, whatever it may be.

P.S.: Will you update any of your fanfics in the foreseeable future? Also, are you alright over there? No updates generally tend to make people assume the worst, especially with what is happening.

Lovely story can't wait for it to progress