| Reviews for A Beautiful Curse |
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ninjafanhein chapter 4 . 8/28 please update |
FenreldStormblade chapter 4 . 8/22 interesting story so far. I see Karin, Kin, Sasuke, Hinata, and Tenten in a relationship with Naruto... if Hinata doesn't get turned into paste. |
FenreldStormblade chapter 3 . 8/22 Hinata vs Gaara... rest in peace Hinata |
legendarydragonslayerblake chapter 4 . 6/2 Please continue this! Its amazing! And i love the last part because jiraiya had it coming for all the times he as peeked to look at girls. |
zalcik chapter 4 . 5/29 after reading your story i think you're doing a great job so far. you may want to ease up a bit on jiraya, Kakashi, Sakura, danzo and the civilians as some of the things you write come across as bashy and that lowers the quality of your work. I would also advise you to not give too much too quick to Naruto to keep him from being godlike! you've done a graduate job in shaking things up specially with your matches by giving an opportunity to some underdogs and i can't wait for the actual chunin exam. I hope you decide to publish the whole thing as there are few stories that actually show the whole exam. I hope you decide to continue to write this and it to be done your way whatever it may be. great job |
Phantom Frost chapter 4 . 5/17 Really enjoying this story not very many fics where Sasuke changes its usually he starts as female either way loving it and really hope you'll release the next chapter soon |
SoulboundAlchemist chapter 4 . 3/30 Good lord, this is FANTASTIC! Why the heck haven't you continued this? |
redHussar chapter 4 . 1/13 The idea with gender bent Sasuke was genius. The thing is, she didn't struggle at all with her new situation - the same day she became a girl she fell in love with Naruto - it was too quick. The thing that really put me off is enormous harem - while Karin I can understand (he saved her life and she is from his clan), it seems that it's enough for him to smile and look at any random girl and she is his. I am talking here about Temari - she quickly thought that he is a perfect guy and told a ninja from a village that she is about to invade about her plans! To a lesser degree the similar effect was shown with Tenten - ok, the idea with seal making her forget Naruto could be interesting, but as an idea for another story. |
Fauxysama chapter 4 . 1/9 Good job, hope you continue to update this |
reptoholic chapter 4 . 11/18/2019 very good, keep up the great work. Please a different summon |
reptoholic chapter 3 . 11/18/2019 keep it up |
reptoholic chapter 2 . 11/18/2019 awww |
reptoholic chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 interesting |
RWIW chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Just wanted to say that I enjoy your stories. Keep up the good work, man. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/3/2019 Cant waite for the next chapter |