Reviews for Don't Blink Yet
Hoppy854 chapter 2 . 7/27
I’m absolutely loving this story. I especially love the misunderstandings too. The funny thing would be that the misunderstandings all lead to people coming to the conclusion that there is another secret society out there. That would be hilarious, what with all the antics Harry can get up to.
FaeGhostReader chapter 2 . 7/23
You have me intrigued. Please continue.
Vaughn Tyler chapter 2 . 7/18
Nice
Awa22 chapter 2 . 7/15
I like this story a lot, looking forward to future chapters :D
MythplacedLogic chapter 2 . 6/25
I love this! It’s fun to see Harry running around and causing Chaos!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3
Just re-read the story and noticed somthing I didn't the first time. Is Bianca Xanxus's mother? Same coloring, and she seems to have a similar personality.
abeorth chapter 2 . 5/27
thanks for the chapter
Black Dragoniss chapter 2 . 5/26
I like this story, I like this story a lot. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next
W chapter 2 . 5/25
Oh wow I couldn’t care less about Reborn at this point. Would it be too much to ask for Harry x Bianca?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24
Me gusta tu historia.
rachil chapter 2 . 4/28
Welp, I'm smitten with this story xD
lueBirdie chapter 2 . 4/28
Ive been hooked ans i love Harry's slightly unhinged behaviour! Its sucha good read!
en-shaedn chapter 2 . 4/27
Ho hum ho hum...I really enjoyed this. I like Bianca; I like her spirit, her gumption, the fact that she's a whole person. I'd love to see how Harry handles some of the psychological implications of the woman's time in captivity, given she's absolutely scarred from it.

Reborn is kind of a shit, but it's fun; I'd be cool with them never growing beyond anything but friendly antagonists. Specifically, the bit where she goes "Ugh" and he reacts? Giggle worthy.

Question: maybe you said, but can Harry not just call up a dead guy from this world to answer Mafia Magic Fire questions?
Meeep chapter 2 . 4/26
I'm glad you're continuing this! :D

So far, I think it's really interesting and, while I would LIKE Harry to end up with someone in a relationship, I suspect it probably won't be Reborn, for some reason, unless he learns to respect her boundaries better.

As for Bianca, well her story's looking pretty interesting so far, though I hope whatever the deal is with her family doesn't take too long to be sorted out.

I'll be honest, I'm kind of worried about Harry being immortal, that seems to almost never go well when the immortal person is alone.
novonia chapter 2 . 4/24
I have to say I like this and am pleasantly surprised. stay safe in the crazy crazy world out there
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