Just binged, it's okay. It could be a lot better though. You're writing so much about her golden energy and focusing on her solo abilities that progress is snail slow. She is bored? Why not salvage or reinvent some technology? I get that reformations might cause a civil war if she immediately went with them but tech should be fine, no one can burn her as a heretic for it.

After everything was done and normalcy was achieved imagine someone forming a romantic relationship with Mal...poor guy/gal ... 5 6 big inhumanely strong big bros and emperor as the dad...the talk of dont make my daughter/sister would be a hilarity to be honest

Awesome chapter, I honestly can't wait to see how she eventually will meet other Chapter's, High Lords and Saints.

Knowing Warhammer 40k...We need an EXTREMELY OP MC. Lol.

Actually it is unlikely that an work would look to the librarian in fear, as how they're minds work makes them unreasonably happy when seeing their commrads blown to bits

When you fire a bolter but realize just after you squeeze the trigger that a bolter fires a round that's 10x larger than a grenade

I really enjoy the interactions with the sisters of battle

Congratulations on winning silver! It's great to see that you're still continuing this story!

heyyyy finllyou updated...thanks bro for updte and stay safe

Is Mal gonna get the Idea of getting the Emperor Text-to-Speech? For him to have contact again?

Nice update can’t wait for more .

Great news about the changes to make it fit in the universe. But i hope that doesn’t include Mel. She’s an outsider and she should remain that way. I already hated how you made her dark and uncaring in previous chapters to make her “fit”. But if she’s like everyone else personality wise why would the Emperor bother bringing her here?. Why not any random girl on terra?.

The same for her power level even with the last ch upgrade she’s powerful. but not powerful enough to explain the effort of dragging her from other universe.

So my answer is a nicer stronger Mel.

I know everyone hates mary sue characters. And in any other fic I’ll agree. But in 40k they might be a refreshing change to all that grim dark. Not asking for something big just turn her back to caring about the common people.

I mean this is a fix it fic right? We don’t get many of those. Most are as dark or darker then the original. Please don’t get sucked in and do the same for this story.

I love this fic

Nice. Very nice.

This is a fun fanfic. Gonna be a difficult wait for the next chapter.