This is good, it could be great if it gets finished.

Thanks for what you have written, now please write more.

There is a nice Willow/Darla on NearHerAlways.

I found this by looking for Darla fics here on FFN.

And you should update this before Darla gets impatient.

Excellent story please update soon thanks.

Awesome story please please please please continue it.

very good! whana reade more about it.. )

The love bit came much too quickly. I'd expect

a roadtrip and some bonding over slaying and

saving each other before it's believable. At least

some decent conversations. They've barely spoken

to each other.

Good chapter. Very touching scene between the two.

Buffy couldn't sense that Darla was a vamp?

When did Xander fall in love? We didn't

see enough interaction between the two to

justify that.

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Review for all nine parts to date: Excellent! The way you have of expressing the emotions of the characters is truly well done. The flow of the story is, though aggravating at times, well done as well. Please keep up the good work and write more soon.

Grossclout

The Editor From Hell

You did say it was going to be a dark fic, so yes I thought it was.

Either way, damn you. You're not writing fast enough. Must have more!

You you turn tease. but serously this has alot of potential, my biggie questions are the why's why is darla attracted to him why is xander soo willing to be turned(there has to be more), and why is deadboy such a spaz, no really what is angel reaction to the fact that he has been well and truly replaced

Good story, I have to admit this is the second story of Xander/Darla that I have read. I also have to say that nope, I didn't think you would turn Xander. lol That would make the story to obvious. I look forward to the next chapter.

Great storie, please update soon

I love it. There is a distinct lack of Xander/Darla fic out there and this is the best i've read on . I have noticed that it's been a while since you updated, Please Update.