Great story, you really did a good job of catching the characters. I really wish you would write a second chapter that's a year after or more. Still awesome job and keep it up.

I think you did well. I'm always interested in more Harmony pairings especially with some good erotic scenes between them. Thank you for participating in this fest and to them as well for starting it.

ow! wow! that was awesome so sweet and nice .. just perfect

I love it! Thank for posting...harmony is my favorite.

I like it! Nice one shot. You should do some more... Only Harmony

The Viktor Krum part kinda ruined this... well I wasn't surprises as it seems to be a trend to have external factors interfering between Harry and Hermione...