Best description yet of what his dad, and probably to a lesser extent himself, look like when fully transformed. I'm curious to see if everything Mickey is experiencing is all in his head or some of it is just stuff he's seeing through a connection with his dad. Unclear if the vision in the classroom was the latter or even just a memory.
Definitely glad to Allison is back and looking forward to seeing what you have in store for them this arc. I'd actually forgotten about the Darach so it was a nice surprise to see his new teacher pop up

I wonder if his dad is talking about the Dread Doctors? If so it'll be interesting how you write that arc and what further changers it might bring. Glad that Allison is back. Hopefully she explains what brought her back. I don't remember if you originally portrayed her trip as temporary, but I hadn't thought so.
Looking forward to seeing were you go from here

Nice quick update time. I'm curious why his dad was smiling at him like that, but hopefully they talk again next chapter.

A nice poignant chapter. Very powerful. I like how your writing style has evolved since your first take on this story and look forward to seeing what you have in store next. Hopefully we find out what happened to his mom. I'm interested to see your take on the Alpha Pack arc

What a twist. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned next. How will Allison take this development? Will Gerard finally die before he does in the show? You leave a lot of questions but not in a bad way. A way that makes you want to read more

not good , why the hell do you have to kill Erica , not good at all

I like the story so far, but there is also plenty to improve on. Like how many holes there are that leads to this story feeling like a mess. You skip so much that it feels like swiss cheese. I get thar we know it from watching the show, but it really lowers the quality of the story if you dont include stuff actually happening instead of telling how it went after it already happend. You even skipped a season finale! That's not good man.
Next is the fact that you don't dare to change any or not much of the plot. I get that original content is scary, but the presence of the OC would absolutely change what happens. Don't be afraid of killing off a character earlier or having the OC save people. Mabey even have him resolve situations in a faster manner. If you don't, then the OC will end up feeling like something slapped onto the main story. He'll feel like an extra and not neccesary for anything. In other words: useless.

Now please don't be discouraged by my stupidly harsh words. You got a good character going here so don't waste him. I DO look forward to reading what comes next!

Another good chapter. Really looking forward to what happens next and if anything further deviates from canon

Things are picking up! It seems your skipping around a little bit but it's not something that really detracts from the overall story. I'm presently surprised you put 3 new chapters up at once and I'm looking forward to getting caught up. I just wanted to say your writing style and story direction is much better this time around. Really enjoying the story

Really nice story, update pls

Good to see you back. I'm definitely liking this take on your story. Your skills have refined with the passage of time. Looking forward to the next chapter and to see what further changes you make. Hopefully they stay together, but I wonder if he'll be turned again or remain human

Hope you update soon.

Hope you update soon

Can you add smut

This was a good chapter and the confrontation between them outside the window was well written. It took a while, but he finally told Scott to back off. Glad to see things with Allison are still going strong. You just might want to go through it again because there are a few spelling errors. Looking forward to the next chapter