Tbh, I didnt get how that was a major burn, all Jack has to say is thats what rich influential family tells people and his story is still very believable.

Nice jab from Diana .. Hit right where it hurts

I liked the chapter. I thought you were going to finish this, but this was good. Diana making Jack know that she knows the truth of his history with Bruce and his family. The interaction was good.
Now, I'm waiting for more for Bruce and Diana.

Sry to say this. But tht reason is kinda toooo small and exaggerating.

Will Diana discover everything as in the original story ? And who will tell her? Can't wait to read your next chapter.

Excellent. This history is about to end, but you are doing it excellent. I liked the Bruce and Clark conversation, and the sisters interaction with Harley is good.
I'm wating for more. And, I understand you. I can't write more fanfics chapters because I'm still at the school. Take your time.

good job

Hey it wouldnt be a Batman fanfic without someone throwing some cash around

Yes. Bruce is going to rescue Harley. I liked the Bruce and Selina's discussion, and I'm waiting fo the next chapter. I hope Bruce and Diana can meet again in the next chapter.

nice

I guess said M. Wayne is even more angry and he had time to think about retalition during his trip to London. Selina is usually smart she should understand where her interests are especially considering that if Bruce is at her door to help the Princetons then it is obvious that she already lost him to Diana... no need to torture herself with useless complications, and he is a better acquaintance then Napier if she can help him out... but lets see where you go.

Ay, you surprised me now tih Selina and her story that will be explored in the next chapters. I hope Bruce can fix this and go back with Diana. Waiting for more.

nice

I love this story please update

Heh, almost but not quite