good story, I really enjoyed it

perfect rwby song for this book: This life is mine

Why do you keep spelling her name Salam? Isn't it spelled Salem where the E comes after the L and before the M? What's going on with you?

Well then, this covered a lot more than I thought it would. Interesting idea, starting out with a Beowolf POV; gives me Borderlands flashbacks, lol.

I think it was a good idea to tone down Shadow's dialogue a bit. I don't hate him like other people seem to, buuuuuuut yeah...

Also, I don't remember, can Nat use her silver eyes still? The only reason she wouldn't imo is if the cloning process fucked with her biology too much. Somehow. Also, while it makes sense that a Spartan would be highly resistant to the Apathy, I don't really feel like you had her struggle enough against them. That might just be me, though.

Anyways, that's all from me for now. Enjoyed the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!

So red are you going to go back to the early chapters and some fixes to to set it with the new time line and grammar fixes bty Bata Company started training in 2537 BTY so if you need to fix the data for the new information?

I can't take this story seriously when Red came in chapter 3, Though i liked Noble/Summer and her daughters reconnecting.

So is Ruby's boyfriend cause Summer/Noble 6 going to be protective of her daughter. The question is how much?

Third chapter was going extremely well until close to the end, seriously that's just cringly random it had me sitting here going "just what the hell am I reading"

It's a nice fic, but one quick thing... YOU NEED TO TAG THE CHARACTERS FOR THE FIC. Seriously, your fics do not appear at all if someone searches for specific characters. Do you have any idea how absolutely fucking annoying it is to try and find one of your fics without being able to remember the name? It took me more than an hour of searching to find "The Huntress and the Spartan", having read it a while back and wanting to re-read it.

TLDR: TAG THE GODDAMN CHARACTERS. AT LEAST THE FUCKING PROTAGONIST.

Interesting that you decided to throw the entire Battle of Haven arc into one chapter, also like the way you did the Summer-is-Noble reveal.

Meanwhile Blake's probably wondering why there's suddenly a really big and armored Ruby running around. Fun times ahead :)

Needs a lot of revising for spelling and grammar

Isn’t qrows sword named harbinger

Pretty sure that beam wouldn’t hurt a Spartan in hull MJOLNIR armor regardless of armor lock

Very nice, some grammar and spelling issues, but overall well done

*Deep inhale*
I am so glad you're back! (For real)
This chapter was amazing and I love that Mando Reference.
Shadow was a personality I didn't know missed. I also secretly wonder if he already knows who Nat really is.

I just really enjoy the whole dynamic between SpartanAI, Spartan and Huntsmen, and AIHuntsman. Its hilarious!

I eaglerly await the next installement!