Wow this was really enjoyable.
Then again I'm super biased, I love Naofumi X Raphtalia.
I particularly liked the wholesome and warm relationship, you did great!
Hopefully we'll see more Naofumi X Raphtalia in the near future!

YES YES YES! I want more! It’s so good! I will gladly Read this! Please write more!

god bless the kid

Greetings and salutations! I speak for most, if not almost all of us, when I say this... please give us more.

This was a good one shot and many wish to see where it would go from here, me included... so from the bottom of my heart, please make more

I'm rather baffled the story that has more favorite among yours is the one that's probably dropped

I love this! Oh how I wish there’s a continuation to see if she gets a baby :)

Hey, I really liked how you had this play out, but it's been a year and you haven't added any chapters. Are you planning on doing that?

I hope you continue this story. Love it a lot.

its interestibg to see this new route. it could be good to se when trash and btch go down XD. sorry im a litle rusty writing english and is not my native language

Boy oh boy you have got to continue this and make it more then a one-shot, seriously this is one of the best fanfiction's i have read and I'm intrigued by where this can be taken.

This is cool

I hope you find it in yourself to come back and keep writing this story. It’s quite enjoyable.

good

I would love to see this story continue.

It would be great to see a second part to this. I love the story concept and I really enjoyed your writing.