| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin |
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  Linda chapter 4 . 8/12 Really like the story hope to read more soon. Wouldn't Draco be in trouble being Sirius is Lord Black, I would also think Harry could charge him with assault. |
 RT89 chapter 4 . 8/10 Well, that got active quickly, looking forward to more. |
| RT89 chapter 3 . 8/10 Yeah, Rita has NO IDEA who she's messing with, I hope she learns. |
| god of all chapter 4 . 8/7 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Vanadir chapter 4 . 8/7 Brilliant thank you for a great story |
| James Birdsong chapter 4 . 8/1 This is great of course |
| Jthomajba chapter 4 . 7/30 Bravo, next chapter |
| Sohni Slytherin chapter 4 . 7/29 seriously? Harry knows what's to come ... still doesn't even try to learn anything new! goes on dates throughout the summer! really? why the redo or time-travel tag if only change is Harry dating Daphne? what exactly they did in the summer months apart from dating and sleeping together? I hate this kind of stories where a mere female presence just get rid of the nightmares. |
| PascalDragon chapter 4 . 7/26 Love Harry and Daphne as a pair. I'm looking forward how things will go and whether there will be new troubles along the way (*cough* Ginny *cough* - not to mention Draco of course :P ) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24 Good story, but like most you need to work on the character dialogue. Try to base the dialogue for Harry/Daphne/other school children on how you talk or how you've heard others talk. Sirius on how a fun uncle type would interact with people, Cyrus/non-professor characters on how you would perceive professional business people to interact with each other, and Dumbledore/professors on how academics might interact with each other |
| Rooster0972 chapter 4 . 7/24 Nice story! It's nice to see a variation to a time travel fic. |
| EagleHasLanded chapter 4 . 7/22 Enjoying the story. I thought after Harry told Sirius everything (or assumed it was everything), that the knowledge Death gave him on the Horucruxes that they may have started to hunt them down by now. But overall, a good story so far. |
| Hank1967 chapter 4 . 7/22 Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry surviving Ron and Ginny, although he still hasn't run up against Molly Weasley... And I see Draco still hasn't learned anything. Also glad to see Harry protecting Daphne against the assault. I do hope that Daphne will be contacting the Aurors and pressing charges... Looking forward to the next installment! |
| Jbrowny16 chapter 4 . 7/22 AWESOME! Please tell me that you are going to finish this story I LOVE the ones with HarryDaphne and HarrySusan |
| Hank1967 chapter 3 . 7/22 Just how did Rita find out about this?! The dirty, rotten bug! Enjoyed the conversation between Harry and Daphne. They are a good pair of kids. |
