I think you could be a actual author.I mean like making up all the characters,the plott,events and seriously you are really good at writing

This one isn't too exciting, but I understand you're setting up the story and the next chapter will be better once we get done catching up with Breaking Dawn.

Hey, on the last sentence I think you meant to put "A smile spread across her face" not "I smile spread across her face". I'm loving your book though!

Loving this. The detail and progression is great. Slight edit needed: the Blacks do no “own” the Cullens, they may however “owethem.

Great story. You said it was ok to suggest edits. Last sentence should end “their fantasy.”

Why does she say MY Jacob so many times. Once or twice is fine but it’s weird if she calls him that all the time.

Really enjoyed both of your stories. Looking forward to the next book.

Hope to see you back with the next book soon.

I liked how things went down with Jacob and Edward. I feel it was more intense this time around. Loving this story

I love that you write in both POVs and that your chapters are lengthy.

I like it

Since you asked, I'm loving this series! But vampire, werewolf and imprint DO NOT HAVE CAPTIALS. Great storyline, believable!

Im reading it! (Obvi cuz i left so many reviews lol) i dont think its a waist. Thank you for sticking with it!

I love her jealous moment hate it know nahuel gets his hands on her and jacob gets hurt

Thanks for a great chapter. I have been reading your story for about the past couple weeks and I haven't even got a chance to read the original story Surerise yet. Keep on writing and post more soon.
Thanks, Debbie