This is super super cute. More Thormione one shots please you write them so well! Honestly Thorfinn was adorable in this and I love how you write Hermione in every fic you do!

omg I love this!

I’ve read this a bunch of times and only just now realized she said she’s NOT going to ingest her potion. It didn’t take much for Thorfinn to convince Hermione - but then, why would it? My favorite pair...and your version of them is my favorite :).

Yooooooooo this is dope! Super hella cute. I'm melting, I can't, I think I might cry (low key impossible but still) I need chocolate and wine and a good rom com now. This was too cute, I can't function. I literally does of cuteness overload when he said he didn't like even numbers and that he liked odd better, and that he married her because she was odd. Reminds me of the Prime Time Lovin' poem. Ok gtg brb gonna cry now k thanks bye

I love the fluffy! they are adorable... great one shot.. I could read a whole series just on how they got there and what their life is like.

Sweet family one shot :)

$? And what about Dolohov? Where did he get his kidlet from? I don't think he will settle for anyone else. Although Luna may work!

nice fluff

Very nice!

Who wants five children anyway?
It was really funny to read and I enjoyed it :)

This is very cute. Love a prequel to this.

I love the way you write this pairing. I keep picturing Chord Overstreet as Thorfinn, especially the way he looked when he used to wear his blond hair long and shaggy. Helps that he's muscled and huge compared to Emma in their pictures together.

Man! You know he could get her to up the number of kids they have! Wonderful..,

Hehehehe good on Hermione

~Tori

No offence it’s complete trash just pleaseeee make a sequel to take the tumble I want to know what happens after the pregnancy shock p.s don’t you dare make it a one shot it has to be atleast 60 to 80 chapter minimum