nice

Please, Please, Keep on WRITING!

This was really sweet near the end of the story.

If he had the ability to breathe underwater...

I couldn't help but think of "When Lightning Strikes" this chapter.

Good chapter. I was wondering. In the future, even though they're settling down in the domain, will Link and Mipha continue their adventures together?

Ah, I guess I can understand that, never mind for now then.

Mipha is kinda mean right now, in my opinion at least. She knows how he feels by now, and instead of telling him, she needs him to tell her because what? She hasn't shown to be that shy since Medoh and has manipulated situations to emphasize her importance in his mind, yeah halfway through she had received validation of his feelings at least on a subconscious level and that was what previously kept her from confessing, but now she is just putting needless stress on things. Yeah it is a story, yeah you can change things on a whim, but the words you use have built a more mean, not bad or evil or sadistic just a slight level of "mean", that is kind of disconcerting when thinking of how relationships like that tend to go.

Mipha is really building her own situations here.

What about Hylian Retrievers?

This story is honey sweet! If Zelda had a rupee for the number of times I had to pause to squeal or calm myself down before going on, maybe, just maybe, all of Hyrule’s rebuilding would’ve been funded sevenfold!

Good job. Just curious, will the Champions’ Ballad happens in this story? TBH, it would be interesting.

As always, good job. I wonder how Link and Mipha’s family would be like.

I remember watching a video of what might happened if Link survived the Calamity, the conclusion doesn't look good for the heroes

Excellent job. I've been monitoring your story off and on (busy schedule) and I must say, I'm very impressed. I've seen other Mipha/Link stories, but they either fall short or they never finish. Good job with the original concept, and I can't wait to see to what conclusion you bring this story.