I love it and can't wait for more!

I like your world’s Izaya! You make him much more likeable and relatable. And your OC and her multiple identities is interesting too! It’s been a while since I’ve seen a good IzayaxOC fic so keep it up! 3

Whatever's good for you man as long as you update I'm fine

i think i’d be happy with either short or long, really depends on how u feel

I love this story. It’s been a while since I’ve seen a good IzayaxOC fic, so excellent work. Please update soon!

you had to make you smoke the brain for this famous game (｡﹏｡)

I love this fanfic(〃ω〃)

No one has left a review yet! I'm surprised!

I'm loving the story so far, the plot has really grabbed my attention and I'm curious as to see where it'll go next. I hope you don't drop it!

I'm not sure if I'm alright to leave any (hopefully?) constructive criticism, but I do have a few things that I would personally find better.

Your writing style is flowing really nicely and the balance between action, mundanity and description is really easy to read and just darn pleasant!

The one thing I would like to nitpick about is the slight inconsistency of the characters, although I'm not quite sure inconsistency is the right word.
I find it most noticeably in Izaya and the OC, where they feel really complex and well layered as characters, with great dialogue and interaction, and then all of a sudden I find it kind of slips up? They almost stick out from the rest of your writing because they feel very basic and "childishly" written in comparison.
To specify a little more, the I notice the slip ups tend to happen mid conversation. When one of the characters tries to "pressure" the other into revealing their true character and the internal dialogue begins, I personally find myself wanting a little more depth in the character and the dialogue. A few more feelings hidden from the reader with more complex/slightly less repetitive language perhaps.
Also, the two also seem to have inconsistent control of how strong they are mentally, I feel. Sometimes they're both strong and immovable, and other times it seems to go out of the window a bit. That's definitely not to say people are human and they have moments of weakness, but I think it swings a little 'too' much to feel real.

Honestly, I am far from a writer myself and would never come close to being able to write like you, so I can only look up to you. I just hope that my insight might help your writing slightly? Sorry if it's all a bit vague too. All in all though, I am SUPER hyped about the next chapter, and where this story is going.

Please don't stop writing!